Get Your Premium Membership

Haiku Two You - For contest

It was one of those mornings when rain poured sideways... horizontal blinds. It was a happy morning when flowers awoke... springtime explosion.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/23/2016 9:26:00 PM
Hi George, Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed the read. I Love Haikus. This goes into my faves....Vlad.
Login to Reply
Aul Avatar
George Aul
Date: 3/24/2016 9:32:00 AM
Thank you and congrats also.............. George
Date: 3/23/2016 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Login to Reply
Aul Avatar
George Aul
Date: 3/24/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thank you............ George
Date: 3/23/2016 11:56:00 AM
Well done, George, great haiku. You could have used a vertical expulsion from the earth as from bulbs. But maybe that would have been a little too much similarity. I like it as it is and congratulations on your placement.
Login to Reply
Aul Avatar
George Aul
Date: 3/24/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thanks for the comment and congrats also............ George
Date: 3/22/2016 9:29:00 PM
I agree with Sara....awesome George! Congratulations on your super win! ;)
Login to Reply
Aul Avatar
George Aul
Date: 3/23/2016 9:50:00 AM
Thank you for the nice reply............. George
Date: 3/22/2016 5:42:00 PM
Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara
Login to Reply
Aul Avatar
George Aul
Date: 3/23/2016 9:49:00 AM
Thank you for sponsoring the contest................. George
Date: 3/22/2016 12:32:00 PM
Nicely done for the contest, George. Congrats.
Login to Reply
Aul Avatar
George Aul
Date: 3/22/2016 1:47:00 PM
Thank you and congrats also.............. George
Date: 3/22/2016 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win :-)
Login to Reply
Aul Avatar
George Aul
Date: 3/22/2016 1:49:00 PM
Thank you and congrats and family good fortune............ George
Date: 3/10/2016 5:58:00 PM
what lovely imagery George:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Aul Avatar
George Aul
Date: 3/11/2016 11:31:00 AM
Thank you................ George