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Haiku Two You - For contest

It was one of those
mornings when rain poured sideways...
horizontal blinds.

It was a happy
morning when flowers awoke...
springtime explosion.

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Date: 3/23/2016 9:26:00 PM
Hi George, Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed the read. I Love Haikus. This goes into my faves....Vlad.
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George Aul
Date: 3/24/2016 9:32:00 AM
Thank you and congrats also.............. George
Date: 3/23/2016 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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George Aul
Date: 3/24/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thank you............ George
Date: 3/23/2016 11:56:00 AM
Well done, George, great haiku. You could have used a vertical expulsion from the earth as from bulbs. But maybe that would have been a little too much similarity. I like it as it is and congratulations on your placement.
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George Aul
Date: 3/24/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thanks for the comment and congrats also............ George
Date: 3/22/2016 9:29:00 PM
I agree with Sara....awesome George! Congratulations on your super win! ;)
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George Aul
Date: 3/23/2016 9:50:00 AM
Thank you for the nice reply............. George
Date: 3/22/2016 5:42:00 PM
Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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George Aul
Date: 3/23/2016 9:49:00 AM
Thank you for sponsoring the contest................. George
Date: 3/22/2016 12:32:00 PM
Nicely done for the contest, George. Congrats.
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George Aul
Date: 3/22/2016 1:47:00 PM
Thank you and congrats also.............. George
Date: 3/22/2016 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win :-)
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George Aul
Date: 3/22/2016 1:49:00 PM
Thank you and congrats and family good fortune............ George
Date: 3/10/2016 5:58:00 PM
what lovely imagery George:-) hugs Jan xx
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George Aul
Date: 3/11/2016 11:31:00 AM
Thank you................ George