Haiku Trio

jovial fortress garnished in the dawn of light fragmented pieces stone echoes my thought winding Connecticut calls a time of sowing a terrace of rock spring melancholy arrives canvas exploding __________________________ Contest ~ "Your Thoughts" Poet ~ Rick Parise

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2011 1:14:00 PM

Very creative..Congrats...Sara

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/10/2011 10:27:00 AM

Nicely written trio. I'm not a great fan of Haiku (anybody can write them), but in the hands of a talented writer such as you, they can be well worth reading! Well done indeed! Regards, Robert.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2011 7:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Michael's Your Thoughts contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2011 7:43:00 PM

Very nicely done, Rick. The picture inspired you. Congratulations!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2011 12:14:00 PM

Magnificent description of the Seventh Sister estate, Rick. Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 5/22/2011 8:52:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your super win...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/22/2011 8:11:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your super win in Michael's contest with this brilliant write my friend.. enjoy this wonderful win and am honored to be sharing winners list with u luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/22/2011 8:02:00 AM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of michael, Rick

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2011 6:56:00 PM

nice thoughts.. deep good luck in the contest.., Wishing you a wonderful mothers day.. :-) p

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/6/2011 5:44:00 PM

You did a fantastic job of combining the "thoughts" with the "nature" aspect required in haiku. Michael told me mine was off -- it was a senryu, so I rewrote it. This is simply perfect and I can hear the echoes of your houghts winding through the Connecticut countryside. Superb, Rick! Had to rewrite mine, but yours is just what he wants. I'll look for your poem in the winners' circle. Love and best wishes for a great weekend, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2011 1:34:00 PM

way to go with this challenge, Rick. I really am wanting to go find out more about this place now. (if I am to write about it at all) I know you will do well in the contest!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/6/2011 11:10:00 AM

rick! you amaze with me with this set of 'kus... very solid and distinct write.. : "a time for sowing" says it all...haven't even started mine!! winning's best! :) huggs, nette