Haiku Sentry

Grey bowed wing heron

lands as sentry of quick death ~

pickerels dart deep .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 2, 2014 at 11:20 AM
Nature is tough, seemingly cruel, and the source of much beauty! Lily Tomlin said, "Instead of survival of the fittest, there should be survival of the wittiest, then we'd all die laughing!" Keep writing!
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December 2, 2014 at 11:45 AM
Thank you for your time and comment .I did like the first few words of your summary ...Miken
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