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Grey bowed wing heron lands as sentry of quick death ~ pickerels dart deep .

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Date: 12/2/2014 11:20:00 AM
Nature is tough, seemingly cruel, and the source of much beauty! Lily Tomlin said, "Instead of survival of the fittest, there should be survival of the wittiest, then we'd all die laughing!" Keep writing!
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Michael Newman
Date: 12/2/2014 11:45:00 AM
Thank you for your time and comment .I did like the first few words of your summary ...Miken