Haiku, I Love You
HAIKU, I LOVE YOU
Haiku I love you.
‘Put seventeen syllables’:
‘Japanese view.’
Count ‘five’ for first line.
‘seven’ comes on second line,
Third line holds ‘five.’ Fine!
Short, cute too little,
Yet thought immense, deed and dense:
‘Poem to kindle.’
Congratulation!
A great contribution by
Poets of Japan.
01/13/18
'Haiku, I Love U' Contest nby James Edward Lee Sr.
Copyright © Anisha Dutta | Year Posted 2018
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