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Haiku Haiku

Abstract thought within I grant you permission to leave You dance and twirl free

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2023 3:03:00 PM

Very nice one, Dilly Dally. Congrats

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/31/2023 3:29:00 PM

Thank you

Matt Caliri

Date: 8/24/2023 8:21:00 PM

Very nicely done. I enjoyed this taut write. Congrats on 15th place out of 71 entries!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/24/2023 10:18:00 PM

Ahh put like that then I shall! Thank you :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/24/2023 11:43:00 PM

so lovely poem, this is "pure poetry" for me, thanks a lot

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/25/2023 12:20:00 AM

Glad you like it Yann, it's for the what is a haiku contest