Haiku Four

Fox sits patiently A cunning expectant foe Waits for his dinner

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Wayland Bunch

Date: 1/30/2013 1:23:00 AM

Nice haiku. I am barely exploring the form. I have known about it, but was truely never interested in it, but all the great examples, such as this one, have broadened my horizons. Thanks for sharing.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2013 4:01:00 PM

This is great. I think it would be even better if you mentioned his prey and what IT was doing about that same time!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/7/2013 7:46:00 PM

I might need a few more lines lol

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/6/2013 7:14:00 AM

Very appropriate for me right now! Just ordered "Oasis", a new (well new to me) nature channel! Incredible programming, incredible filming... check it out! Cheers!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2013 8:02:00 AM

Don't have that one. With new HD technology it must be spectacular imagerey.

David Williams

Date: 1/6/2013 6:27:00 AM

Richard good image...David ..soup mail

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2013 8:02:00 AM

Thanks David