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Haiku D

the wind pushes the hair from my face: brown leaves rustle

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/30/2012 7:21:00 PM

Organic....sensually thrilling!

Fabiyas M V

Date: 6/28/2012 11:12:00 AM

Well done,Debbie.Hope you are well.My book Moonlight and Solitude will be launched on 5th July 2012 at Muncipal Library Hall,Guruvayur,Kreala,India.Many famous writers and an actor will take part in the function.You are cordially invited to the function.With love,Fabiyas M V

Kash Poet

Date: 6/28/2012 9:58:00 AM

Lovely!Was the prompt YOUR FACE ;)

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 6/27/2012 10:13:00 PM

YEAH, WHAT JOAN SAID! Thanks for the placement.. yes, free falling, indeed-y! It felt like I was a horse who'd bucked down the stable door and made for the hills, no joking! I plan to try more modern, but I will always and forever be a fan of the classics. Hmmm... does that make me fickle? Hope you're enjoying summer. It's FLYING here. We bought 'streamers on sticks' for monkey-girl and we spend early evenings running up and down a hill making ribbon-rainbows. Proof that wealth ain't money ;-)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 6/27/2012 10:04:00 AM

A lovely haiku. Thanks you for your encouraging words on my poem, and for placing me in your contest. You have been a giant help to me here and my foray into enlarging my world of writing.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/27/2012 9:43:00 AM

lovely haiku, as ever, Debs - I really love reading and writing this form now, thanks to you x

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/27/2012 8:51:00 AM

I almost felt like pushing back my hair here as well-- I enjoy windy days and this reminded me of that! And thanks so much for my high placement in your contest! Oh wow!! This little monkey is happy to have surprised you :D! I will pass by your winners soon! Hugs to you :D!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/26/2012 11:54:00 PM

i can imagine the blending of windy hair and rustle of leaves, debbie... extraordinary 'k.. thanks for enjoying my summer piece for you. it's my fave season!.. :) huggs!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/26/2012 9:44:00 PM

I always enjoy haiku because it is usually about nature and the seasons. Yours is lovely. Thank you so much for giving my little poem such a wonderful placement in your contest. I don't live in SFO area, my daughter does. I live in Hawaii, so if you are ever on my island of Oahu, be sure to let me know and we can get together. Mahalo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2012 7:33:00 PM

Hi, Debs. A nice fall picture created with this. Thanks for my placement in your contest. Luv, Andrea

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/26/2012 6:42:00 PM

Wow, I really love this one Debbie! It brought me shivers reading it! Awesome Work!!