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On a Fall Picnic

On a fall picnic enticing foods spread round us. . . savoring his kiss Aug 12, 2018 for Harry Horsman's Haiku Captcha Poetry Contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 9/17/2018 8:41:00 PM

Beautiful. I like where this is going. Lovely and flavorful imagery, Andrea.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/1/2018 5:42:00 PM

I'm still not sure I understand the contest Andrea. So if there is a number then you use the first letter of that number? Your entry turned out really beautiful! < : )

Lyric Man

Date: 8/13/2018 11:55:00 AM

PERFECTION!!!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/12/2018 11:48:00 PM

A kiss is sweeter where the food is best. good luck.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/12/2018 6:39:00 PM

Beautiful imagery , Andrea, luck in the contest..Hugs Eve

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/12/2018 3:49:00 PM

Nice one Andrea, the food can wait. Good luck. Tom