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On a Fall Picnic

On a fall picnic
enticing foods spread round us. . .
savoring his kiss

Aug 12, 2018 for Harry Horsman's Haiku Captcha Poetry Contest

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Line Gauthier

September 17, 2018 at 8:41 PM

Beautiful. I like where this is going. Lovely and flavorful imagery, Andrea.

Connie Marcum Wong

September 1, 2018 at 5:42 PM

I'm still not sure I understand the contest Andrea. So if there is a number then you use the first letter of that number? Your entry turned out really beautiful! < : )