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Haiku- Washed Away

sand washed by night's shifting tide -two re-drawn hearts
Contemporary Haiku

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2017 6:50:00 PM
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Love it!
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/14/2017 10:18:00 PM
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Beautiful Haiku. I have a love story with Japan and the people. I try to go there every year, and now with my sweet daughter-in laws help am writing Haiku.
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/11/2017 2:17:00 AM
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I would like to think that those drawings are just covered over and not deleted....what we draw in the sand is usually what we imprint in the heart. Full marks for a beautiful short poem. Regards // paul
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Doug Vinson
Date: 3/10/2017 2:59:00 PM
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Blood richened by reading. : )
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/9/2017 9:21:00 PM
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Great twist at the end...loved it :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/9/2017 8:01:00 PM
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Yes, they need to be re-drawn...nothing can destroy true love. Hugs, dear
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/9/2017 5:28:00 PM
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A lot of impact in those few syllables, I admire this one, Charmaine! All the best ... CayCay
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/9/2017 5:22:00 PM
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A beautiful picture you paint Charma...lovely haiku
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Chris Green
Date: 3/9/2017 5:21:00 PM
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This is beautiful and a little sad my sweet friend. But, the tide always comes back in again. I really loved this poem.
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2017 5:20:00 PM
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aww this is so lovely Charma:-) hugs Jan xx
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