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Haiku - Tears of Time

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as the heavens cry tears slip between each petal the earth breathes new life 03/05/2018

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/15/2023 8:39:00 AM

lovely ~

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/15/2023 10:28:00 PM

Thank you again :)

Alkas Poetry

Date: 1/18/2021 12:22:00 PM

celestial tears tanned by petals falling to the earth that springs the wonder of transformation... Perfection dear, salute alkas

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/18/2021 6:11:00 PM

Thank you dear Alkas :)

Terry Shuff

Date: 12/22/2020 10:07:00 AM

Perfect.

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/22/2020 12:47:00 PM

Thank you Terry. I appreciate it ;)

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/5/2020 8:08:00 PM

WOW! Simply beautiful and cleverly done. I loved it :)

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/6/2020 11:34:00 AM

Thanks so much Kina!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/3/2020 4:43:00 AM

Brilliant. Happy New Year to you and Happy Writing, Kai

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/4/2020 11:08:00 AM

Thank you Kai!

Jw Nugent

Date: 6/21/2018 8:36:00 AM

Very traditional Haiku

Fj Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 1:01:00 PM

Hi JW :) Thank you.

Kedar Ingale

Date: 6/5/2018 4:57:00 PM

Beautified the rain in three simple lines.Every word in that poem is like a wand doing magic

Fj Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 1:01:00 PM

Thank you so much Kedar :)

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 5/16/2018 6:56:00 PM

Inspirational...

Fj Thomas
Date: 5/17/2018 8:15:00 AM

Thank you again J; and for giving so much of your time to me. I look forward to reading your work.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/24/2018 11:53:00 PM

Very nice :)

Fj Thomas
Date: 4/25/2018 9:08:00 AM

Thank you Debbie :)

Kumkazi Mhlongo

Date: 4/9/2018 7:18:00 AM

Delightful, simply sublime!

Fj Thomas
Date: 4/9/2018 9:46:00 AM

Good morning Kumkazi; thank you :)

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 4/7/2018 3:46:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku. Like the relationship between crying and new life. Oliver

Fj Thomas
Date: 4/7/2018 6:52:00 PM

Thank you so much Oliver :)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/6/2018 11:35:00 AM

Back to say awesome Haiku Hugs sweet lady

Fj Thomas
Date: 4/6/2018 7:58:00 PM

Hello dear Lady! Thank you Eve :)

Robert Johnson

Date: 4/6/2018 10:43:00 AM

That is beautiful.

Fj Thomas
Date: 4/6/2018 7:57:00 PM

Thank you very much Robert :)

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/6/2018 10:18:00 AM

Profound imagination, unique imagery, insightful! When rain is poured on land there is growth and life.. When tears are poured out there is relief, healing, bliss and a new life is emerged.

Fj Thomas
Date: 4/6/2018 7:57:00 PM

Ahh you've said that so beautifully Besma. Thank you.

Chris Hagy

Date: 4/6/2018 9:51:00 AM

Your spirit has beautiful described this way to view rain :) Lovely pictures too...my snowdrop flowers are drowning in snow here in Michigan :(

Fj Thomas
Date: 4/6/2018 7:56:00 PM

Chris what a smile you've given me this evening. Thank you :)

Susan Krauter

Date: 4/6/2018 9:44:00 AM

This is beautiful. Very soft and gentle.

Fj Thomas
Date: 4/6/2018 7:56:00 PM

Thank you very much Susan :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/4/2018 10:51:00 AM

Beautiful. Circle of life. Circle of smiles, pain, tears & peace.

Fj Thomas
Date: 4/6/2018 7:55:00 PM

I didn't know I had missed this one. Thank you so much Drakezes!

Maria Williams

Date: 3/29/2018 7:41:00 AM

A fabulous Haiku, Shadow. You have expressed it so well...Maria

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/29/2018 9:59:00 AM

Hello again beautiful Lady. Thanks so much.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/28/2018 8:37:00 PM

Oh Wow fantastic :)

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/29/2018 9:57:00 AM

Morning dear Lady :) Thank you Eve

Paul Callus

Date: 3/23/2018 5:26:00 AM

What lovely imagery, Shadow! Water brings beauty to the fore. Warm regards // paul

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/23/2018 4:26:00 PM

It truly does. Thank you Paul :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2018 5:11:00 PM

Good thoughts put into this one. It seems that we are getting plenty of spring moisture right now. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/23/2018 4:25:00 PM

Thank you Sara. And you're very welcome :)

Kathy Camacho

Date: 3/22/2018 9:37:00 AM

Beautiful, simply elegant.

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/23/2018 4:25:00 PM

Hi Kathy. Thank you so much.

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/22/2018 4:42:00 AM

A breathtaking Haiku Shadow. Absolutely stunning imagery and emotion. Each line is beautiful and your poem is a fave! Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/23/2018 4:24:00 PM

Aww Susan thanks so very much!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/21/2018 4:05:00 PM

- Awesome ... love this one , Shadow of the Past - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/23/2018 4:24:00 PM

Thank you my dear søstre.

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/21/2018 6:27:00 AM

Simply gorgeous...hugs :)

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/23/2018 4:22:00 PM

Hello beautiful Akkina. Thank you so much.