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Haiku - Tears of Time

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as the heavens cry
tears slip between each petal
the earth breathes new life

03/05/2018

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/15/2023 8:39:00 AM

lovely ~

FJ Thomas
Date: 1/15/2023 10:28:00 PM

Thank you again :)

Alkas Poetry

Date: 1/18/2021 12:22:00 PM

celestial tears tanned by petals falling to the earth that springs the wonder of transformation... Perfection dear, salute alkas

FJ Thomas
Date: 1/18/2021 6:11:00 PM

Thank you dear Alkas :)

Terry Shuff

Date: 12/22/2020 10:07:00 AM

Perfect.

FJ Thomas
Date: 12/22/2020 12:47:00 PM

Thank you Terry. I appreciate it ;)

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/5/2020 8:08:00 PM

WOW! Simply beautiful and cleverly done. I loved it :)

FJ Thomas
Date: 12/6/2020 11:34:00 AM

Thanks so much Kina!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/3/2020 4:43:00 AM

Brilliant. Happy New Year to you and Happy Writing, Kai

FJ Thomas
Date: 1/4/2020 11:08:00 AM

Thank you Kai!

Jw Nugent

Date: 6/21/2018 8:36:00 AM

Very traditional Haiku

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 1:01:00 PM

Hi JW :) Thank you.

Kedar Ingale

Date: 6/5/2018 4:57:00 PM

Beautified the rain in three simple lines.Every word in that poem is like a wand doing magic

FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 1:01:00 PM

Thank you so much Kedar :)

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 5/16/2018 6:56:00 PM

Inspirational...

FJ Thomas
Date: 5/17/2018 8:15:00 AM

Thank you again J; and for giving so much of your time to me. I look forward to reading your work.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/24/2018 11:53:00 PM

Very nice :)

FJ Thomas
Date: 4/25/2018 9:08:00 AM

Thank you Debbie :)

Kumkazi Mhlongo

Date: 4/9/2018 7:18:00 AM

Delightful, simply sublime!

FJ Thomas
Date: 4/9/2018 9:46:00 AM

Good morning Kumkazi; thank you :)

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 4/7/2018 3:46:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku. Like the relationship between crying and new life. Oliver

FJ Thomas
Date: 4/7/2018 6:52:00 PM

Thank you so much Oliver :)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/6/2018 11:35:00 AM

Back to say awesome Haiku Hugs sweet lady

FJ Thomas
Date: 4/6/2018 7:58:00 PM

Hello dear Lady! Thank you Eve :)

Robert Johnson

Date: 4/6/2018 10:43:00 AM

That is beautiful.

FJ Thomas
Date: 4/6/2018 7:57:00 PM

Thank you very much Robert :)

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/6/2018 10:18:00 AM

Profound imagination, unique imagery, insightful! When rain is poured on land there is growth and life.. When tears are poured out there is relief, healing, bliss and a new life is emerged.

FJ Thomas
Date: 4/6/2018 7:57:00 PM

Ahh you've said that so beautifully Besma. Thank you.