Haiku Marsh

Out of the vast marsh plaintive grey curlew calling - my sister scolding me.

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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 11/22/2014 10:58:00 PM

Haiku Marsh a good tamash(humor)Thanks for sharing.regards.-Safa

Michael Newman
Date: 11/23/2014 3:59:00 AM

Thank you Muhammad For your time and comment .Appreciated. Miken

Sunshine Smile

Date: 11/13/2014 3:17:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Michael - I choose your first great Haiku - I love Haiku - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Newman
Date: 11/23/2014 4:01:00 AM

Thanks so much .Miken

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/10/2014 2:40:00 AM

Welcome to ps.Such an excellent haiku : )Charma

JAN ALLISON

Date: 11/9/2014 3:08:00 PM

Very creative haiku! hugs Jan xx