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Haiku # 28 .

THE  ICICLE  WEPT  .

THE  HIBERNATOR  JUST  YAWNED  .

WAKE-UP  CALL  FOR  SPRING ... !!!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2010 5:51:00 PM

hahaha. let that icicle just weep. WE want spring!!! Good one, LUv,Andrea

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/29/2009 11:16:00 AM

And if spring is not awake summer will drown us with the certainty of your confidence ... blooming for spring. One love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/28/2009 5:35:00 PM

I like it! personification of the icicle! Yah! Maybe it drooled (duck) maybe it....hmmmm LOL anyway nice imagery thanks for reading my blog & works Light & Love Debbie

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/22/2009 11:05:00 AM

Beautiful image. This song bird is singing for spring! Love, Robin

Date: 1/18/2009 12:59:00 PM

Nice use of personification and imagery. With a lot of snow and recent temps below zero, I can't wait for spring. Enjoyed this one. Karen

Alana Tye

Date: 1/17/2009 8:14:00 AM

This hibernator keeps yawning and peeking out waiting for those icicles to melt. Great piece that put a smile on my face as I think of spring. :) Cheers, Alana

Brian Strand

Date: 1/17/2009 1:15:00 AM

They 'saled' into the Irish sea without a rudder its seems.You'll win it again it if all the games could be played at home it seems.Have a good weekend Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome itty observations

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/16/2009 10:45:00 AM

As usual a sharp edge to this one Sean but it has a good spring to it. Souper. Déirdre

Elaine George

Date: 1/16/2009 6:25:00 AM

AWESOME! Sean, Lainie

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/15/2009 5:17:00 AM

Sean! Love the personification of the icicle and just the whole wake up call of this awesome haiku! Thanks for the hopeful Spring is just around the corner feel! Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/15/2009 2:34:00 AM

HA! And here she is, and ain't she pretty, now! Thank you, kind souper K brother, for sharing this illuminating spring haiku with us!Love it, especially that second line, well done my friend, love, Kristin

Brian Strand

Date: 1/15/2009 12:11:00 AM

A kind of global calling Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your ongoing comments & observations.Was the hibernator from that Edinburgh footie team?