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Haiku # 19

Crow magpie and dove Blackbird thrush robin and wren The pecking order ..... ============================================================== Lunch ~time at our bird~table ; NOT as we wish , but the reality of how it IS !!..

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Date: 6/12/2010 10:13:00 PM
wow, this is not only a fun read, but informative as well!! And the peaceful dove came before blackbird!!!
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Date: 8/28/2008 10:04:00 AM
Again, the form is dead on and the imagery comes through clearly. Love the last line to this and the creativity of it. Michael
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