Haiku :: 7 :: Sunrise

Sunlight on the wall slowly overcomes shadow the sun rises Collection: Haiku Written: November 2019

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Na Na

Date: 11/19/2019 10:41:00 AM

Hi Beto. Nice picture in front of my eyes. Thanks for sharing. I love the sunrise

Beto Riginale
Date: 11/19/2019 10:49:00 AM

Thank you Gregory. I agree with your comment about sunrise. For me, it is the symbol of hope for a better future. beto

Chris Green

Date: 11/19/2019 10:19:00 AM

Nicely done Beto. A beautiful scene captured in three lines.

Beto Riginale
Date: 11/19/2019 10:27:00 AM

Thank you Chris. This is actually a description of the wall in the early morning surrounding my home. beto

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/19/2019 10:13:00 AM

Beautiful and hopeful. Very nice :)

Beto Riginale
Date: 11/19/2019 10:29:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. This is the view first thing every morning when I awake. It reminds me of the hope I have for each day. beto