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Haiku 58 Passing Clouds

between shapeless clouds the first peek of sunbeams on rippled waters 5/6/5-modern haiku Inspired by many beautiful Cloud haiku and senryu for pd's contest.Not for the contest but thanks for the inspiration : )

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Date: 8/1/2014 10:15:00 AM
Love the image, photogenic.
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Date: 7/30/2014 8:54:00 PM
Shimmering sun shine is so enchanting Charma.As a regular sky watcher I love emotional clouds. Cool write. J.A.B.
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Date: 7/29/2014 5:57:00 PM
you really should enter it. It's just marvelous, Charma. Glad you enjoyed my passion poem!
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Date: 7/29/2014 5:38:00 PM
Charma, the imagery is a gift itself. A wonderful haiku.. Linda
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Date: 7/29/2014 2:42:00 PM
Dear Charma, This is a sight I see nearly every day. What a beautiful haiku! How nice that your daughter likes owls. It's priceless to have a one-to-one encounter with an owl. Hope you and your family are doing well, dear. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 7/29/2014 1:17:00 PM
Hi Charmaine, This is a lovely Haiku...loved reading it...Noelle
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Date: 7/29/2014 12:11:00 PM
good job - great use of visual imagery & tactile in the rippling water. Light & Love
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Date: 7/29/2014 11:26:00 AM
Lovely haiku...makes such a captivating picture. // paul
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Date: 7/29/2014 9:05:00 AM
You were inspired! This is so pretty..BG
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Date: 7/29/2014 5:00:00 AM
Reading this is like seeing a baby's smile-- beautiful imagery you put here, Charma! I really enjoyed reading this, thank you!
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Date: 7/28/2014 5:28:00 PM
A beautiful setting...A light shining down from heaven....hugs Tim
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Date: 7/28/2014 5:20:00 PM
You should put it in the contest it is beautiful!
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