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Haiku 58 Passing Clouds

 between shapeless clouds

the  first peek of sunbeams

on rippled waters



5/6/5-modern haiku

Inspired by many beautiful Cloud haiku and senryu for
pd's contest.Not for the contest but thanks for the inspiration : )

Copyright © Charmaine Chircop | Year Posted 2014

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Scott Thirtyseven Date: 8/1/2014 10:15:00 AM Love the image, photogenic. Login to Reply

Justin Bordner Date: 7/30/2014 8:54:00 PM Shimmering sun shine is so enchanting Charma.As a regular sky watcher I love emotional clouds. Cool write. J.A.B. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/29/2014 5:57:00 PM you really should enter it. It's just marvelous, Charma. Glad you enjoyed my passion poem! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/29/2014 5:38:00 PM Charma, the imagery is a gift itself. A wonderful haiku.. Linda Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/29/2014 2:42:00 PM Dear Charma, This is a sight I see nearly every day. What a beautiful haiku! How nice that your daughter likes owls. It's priceless to have a one-to-one encounter with an owl. Hope you and your family are doing well, dear. Love you, Carolyn Login to Reply

Noelle Devereau Date: 7/29/2014 1:17:00 PM Hi Charmaine, This is a lovely Haiku...loved reading it...Noelle Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/29/2014 12:11:00 PM good job - great use of visual imagery & tactile in the rippling water. Light & Love Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 7/29/2014 11:26:00 AM Lovely haiku...makes such a captivating picture. // paul Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 7/29/2014 9:05:00 AM You were inspired! This is so pretty..BG Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 7/29/2014 5:00:00 AM Reading this is like seeing a baby's smile-- beautiful imagery you put here, Charma! I really enjoyed reading this, thank you! Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 7/28/2014 5:28:00 PM A beautiful setting...A light shining down from heaven....hugs Tim Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 7/28/2014 5:20:00 PM You should put it in the contest it is beautiful! Login to Reply