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Haiku Poem 26

thermals high winds gusting chasing my cap

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/2/2018 6:46:00 PM
Joe Vigil - You commented on the wrong poem, I am Tom, not Gloria. Sorry for your confusion.
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Date: 4/2/2018 10:45:00 AM
First of all, great write Gloria. I can feel the torment in you words. I'm so sorry for you loss. when it comes to a broken heart, fault doesn't matter or make things better. Nor will comments like " you'll be ok" things like that. You will feel better, you will go on, but for now, embrace your pain and crank out things like that. It helped me, I hope it helps you too. Good luck Gloria. My heart breaks for you
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Date: 4/2/2018 6:49:00 PM
I am Tom, not Gloria. You commented on the wrong poem, sorry for your confusion.
Date: 4/2/2018 10:41:00 AM
First of all, great write Gloria. I can feel the torment in you words. I'm so sorry for you loss. when it comes to a broken heart, fault doesn't matter or make things better. Nor will comments like " you'll be ok" things like that. You will feel better, you will go on, but for now, embrace your pain and crank out things like that. It helped me, I hope it helps you too. Good luck Gloria. My heart breaks for you
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