Haiku Poem 26

thermals high
winds gusting
chasing my cap
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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April 2, 2018 at 6:46 PM
Joe Vigil - You commented on the wrong poem, I am Tom, not Gloria. Sorry for your confusion.
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April 2, 2018 at 10:45 AM
First of all, great write Gloria. I can feel the torment in you words. I'm so sorry for you loss. when it comes to a broken heart, fault doesn't matter or make things better. Nor will comments like " you'll be ok" things like that. You will feel better, you will go on, but for now, embrace your pain and crank out things like that. It helped me, I hope it helps you too. Good luck Gloria. My heart breaks for you
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April 2, 2018 at 6:49 PM
I am Tom, not Gloria. You commented on the wrong poem, sorry for your confusion.
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April 2, 2018 at 10:41 AM
First of all, great write Gloria. I can feel the torment in you words. I'm so sorry for you loss. when it comes to a broken heart, fault doesn't matter or make things better. Nor will comments like " you'll be ok" things like that. You will feel better, you will go on, but for now, embrace your pain and crank out things like that. It helped me, I hope it helps you too. Good luck Gloria. My heart breaks for you
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