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Haiku 8 - Haven

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from over the sea waves clash, turmoil eddying - sailboats search haven

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Valsa George

Date: 5/9/2022 8:50:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku, dear Victor !

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/3/2021 12:10:00 PM

Boats and ships and deep water scare me a little , why not planes? Well I think your write is exquisite my friend but I prefer to stand on terra firma! Hugs and blessings Victor, Jennifer.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 3/3/2021 10:16:00 AM

amazing imagery Victor xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/1/2021 9:03:00 AM

I can imagine how hard it would be to be out in a sail boat in those kind of waves. I have never been in that situation but it would not be for the faint of heart. Thanks for all your visits. I haven't considered the gun in regards to my dogs but the pounds for the male a time or two then I repent and keep him. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2021 7:10:00 PM

Nice one, Victor

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/28/2021 9:40:00 AM

Your excellent haiku vividly describes a tumultuous scene, and the desperate search for safety. Your picture is a perfect companion to this haiku. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/28/2021 5:00:00 AM

Can feel the fright in this one. Great haiku!

Jan Allison

Date: 2/27/2021 4:27:00 PM

excellent haiku Victor:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/27/2021 11:38:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku, Victor, briny pounding waves toys upon the ship's defenses.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/27/2021 11:05:00 AM

Nice haiku Victor, ship searching for a safe harbour in a storm. Tom

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 2/27/2021 10:12:00 AM

Great haiku. Made me feel I am in boat searching for a haven. Have a great weekend, take care. Rama

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/27/2021 9:53:00 AM

WoW!Victor, You've penned a well-written haiku with good content and imagery. A haven can be difficult to find, but when one does; it's amazing. Have a great day and weekend, my friend:-) Alexis

Judy Ball

Date: 2/27/2021 7:35:00 AM

This picture reminds me of a short prayer I especially like. Oh Lord The sea Is So Big And My Boat Is So small. A fine Haiku my freiend. God Bless, JB