Haiku 77

Haiku 77 easy, tender notes of real rapture sighs, murmurs

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Skat A

Date: 8/21/2013 1:52:00 PM

of beauty it is..... SKAT

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/21/2013 2:26:00 PM

Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2013 6:57:00 AM

I agree with Charlotte too!!!

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/20/2013 8:01:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea... Jack

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/19/2013 8:26:00 PM

Jack, I agree with Charlotte and you wrap up your haikus so nicely with loads of feeling and imagery. Well done :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/19/2013 9:35:00 PM

Thanks, Karen... Jack

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/19/2013 3:56:00 PM

oohh I like this one jack! so much conveyed in so few words, intimate and sensual, nicely done :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/19/2013 4:21:00 PM

Thanks a lot for the nice comment... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2013 2:47:00 PM

Awe, Jack,,, I don't know why but, I feel your words are opening the curtains and allowing beauty and light upon your readers... escaping feels nice when the moment and words are from the heart... Love the tender haiku.... xox~ LINDA

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/16/2013 5:36:00 PM

Why, thank you. A truly lovely comment... Jack

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/16/2013 2:25:00 PM

That's awesome. "Notes of real rapture", I'm diggin' it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/16/2013 1:29:00 PM

- Nice this too ...... sigh .... - Skillfully, "haikujack".... - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/16/2013 1:30:00 PM

Wow! A nickname. Thanks...