Haiku 77

Haiku 77
	
	
	easy, tender
	notes of real rapture
	sighs, murmurs

passionhaiku

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Skat A

August 21, 2013 at 1:52 PM

of beauty it is..... SKAT

Jack Jordan

August 21, 2013 at 2:26 PM

Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich

August 20, 2013 at 6:57 AM

I agree with Charlotte too!!!

Jack Jordan

August 20, 2013 at 8:01 AM

Thanks, Andrea... Jack

Karen Anglesey

August 19, 2013 at 8:26 PM

Jack, I agree with Charlotte and you wrap up your haikus so nicely with loads of feeling and imagery. Well done :)

Jack Jordan

August 19, 2013 at 9:35 PM

Thanks, Karen... Jack

Charlotte Puddifoot

August 19, 2013 at 3:56 PM

oohh I like this one jack! so much conveyed in so few words, intimate and sensual, nicely done :)

Jack Jordan

August 19, 2013 at 4:21 PM

Thanks a lot for the nice comment... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

August 16, 2013 at 2:47 PM

Awe, Jack,,, I don't know why but, I feel your words are opening the curtains and allowing beauty and light upon your readers... escaping feels nice when the moment and words are from the heart... Love the tender haiku.... xox~ LINDA

Jack Jordan

August 16, 2013 at 5:36 PM

Why, thank you. A truly lovely comment... Jack