Haiku 6

brittle cornstalks crackle in the heavy wind -- at dusk the cattle low

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Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/30/2012 7:28:00 PM

I can smell the cattle and the drying stalks. i do love autumn.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/30/2012 1:34:00 PM

love this one, Debs - I'm still trying to think of something for my hay fever haiku, lol. Thanks - fun contest and congrats on all your wins, of course : )

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/30/2012 1:13:00 PM

Hi Debbie, I once loved writing haiku. Now, I don't enjoy writing it as much. I do always enjoy reading yours though. Feedback from you is always appreciated. Hugs, Rhonda

Joy Wellington

Date: 8/30/2012 12:42:00 PM

Only good thing about that Debbie, is, they can take the corn stalks and make feed for the cattle...if any is lelt after the wind is done with it. An Haiku that tells a big story. One love. Joy Wells