Haiku 4

ripples spread from the turning waterwheel -- sparrow song

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/26/2012 4:55:00 PM

love haiku ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2012 11:02:00 AM

I love the picture of this one, Debs.

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 8/19/2012 5:46:00 AM

ah...nicely and lovely :) thanks Debbie ,,,luv SK

David Williams

Date: 8/19/2012 5:16:00 AM

Debbie, wonderful............David

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 8/18/2012 5:16:00 PM

I can see this one. As a teen, I was given a budget to decorate a bedroom (we had moved, again) My sister carefully spent the money. Got a border, bedset, pillows, even posters. I blew it all on wallpaper. The wallpaper was ascene of an old mill, a stream and cattails. I can still close my eyes & see the pattern. It was comforting. I could lose myself in the image, tune out anything.. almost anything...your haiku reminded me of this. You're right!I was subjective, but the slap/meal=tasteless;)

Kash Poet

Date: 8/18/2012 4:00:00 PM

Good capuring of the moment...Thanks Debi,yes I didn't get your comment there.