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Haiku 44

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/29/2014 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations I am happy for your success with this Haiku.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/29/2014 1:35:00 PM
Only "possible" thus far... but I figured I can't submit poems to be published that are already on the web... lol.
Date: 10/29/2014 1:00:00 AM
well gosh dang it!! Hey, Tim, I can't seem to get caught up here. I miss just two days and it's calamity for me. Anyway, I will try to find one more poem of yours before my beddie bye.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/30/2014 1:30:00 AM
Hahaha... yup it's difficult keeping up with for sure!
Date: 10/27/2014 11:06:00 PM
Great Haiku Timothy, a child is so kind and tender :) eve
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/30/2014 1:29:00 AM
Indeed! Except when they are naughty, but other then that... kind and tender. Lol... thanks Eve!
Date: 10/27/2014 6:30:00 PM
This haiku is so full of meaning, my dear friend Tim! I grew up around horses till I was round 7 yrs old, and ended sadly when my parents got divorced. I liked your haiku. Hugs and the best to you Tim! xxx D.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/30/2014 1:29:00 AM
Happy for my haiku to have brought back nostalgia for you - even if it's tinged with a little bit of sadness. My niece got a horse for her 8th birthday and she loves him!
Date: 10/27/2014 1:28:00 PM
Your haikuare exceptional Timothy..If you wish to check haikujournal.org publishings.They might get you published.Awesome!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/30/2014 1:27:00 AM
Thanks for your support, Charmaine. I have done what you suggested... fingers crossed that something happens... lol :)
Date: 10/27/2014 11:57:00 AM
When a child gets on a horse he becomes that knight which he always dreams of! An experienced horse should know and be prepared for that!! .. that's why a whinny, which is a welcoming gentle cry. lovely write // paul
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/30/2014 1:27:00 AM
You know I actually like your interpretation of my haiku, rather than my own. In my mind it was a literal knight... but a child pretending he is a knight if a much more delightful image. You have a keen and discerning eye, Paul.
Date: 10/27/2014 9:09:00 AM
Clever write!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/30/2014 1:26:00 AM
Appreciate the comment, Rick!
Date: 10/27/2014 4:53:00 AM
- GREAT HAIKU, TIMOTHY !!! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/30/2014 1:25:00 AM
Thanks Anne!!
Date: 10/27/2014 4:28:00 AM
smiling tim excellent haiku dear pal
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/30/2014 1:25:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Liam.