Haiku 44

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/29/2014 1:34:00 PM

Congratulations I am happy for your success with this Haiku.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/29/2014 1:35:00 PM

Only "possible" thus far... but I figured I can't submit poems to be published that are already on the web... lol.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/29/2014 1:00:00 AM

well gosh dang it!! Hey, Tim, I can't seem to get caught up here. I miss just two days and it's calamity for me. Anyway, I will try to find one more poem of yours before my beddie bye.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/30/2014 1:30:00 AM

Hahaha... yup it's difficult keeping up with for sure!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/27/2014 11:06:00 PM

Great Haiku Timothy, a child is so kind and tender :) eve

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/30/2014 1:29:00 AM

Indeed! Except when they are naughty, but other then that... kind and tender. Lol... thanks Eve!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/27/2014 6:30:00 PM

This haiku is so full of meaning, my dear friend Tim! I grew up around horses till I was round 7 yrs old, and ended sadly when my parents got divorced. I liked your haiku. Hugs and the best to you Tim! xxx D.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/30/2014 1:29:00 AM

Happy for my haiku to have brought back nostalgia for you - even if it's tinged with a little bit of sadness. My niece got a horse for her 8th birthday and she loves him!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/27/2014 1:28:00 PM

Your haikuare exceptional Timothy..If you wish to check haikujournal.org publishings.They might get you published.Awesome!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/30/2014 1:27:00 AM

Thanks for your support, Charmaine. I have done what you suggested... fingers crossed that something happens... lol :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/27/2014 11:57:00 AM

When a child gets on a horse he becomes that knight which he always dreams of! An experienced horse should know and be prepared for that!! .. that's why a whinny, which is a welcoming gentle cry. lovely write // paul

Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/30/2014 1:27:00 AM

You know I actually like your interpretation of my haiku, rather than my own. In my mind it was a literal knight... but a child pretending he is a knight if a much more delightful image. You have a keen and discerning eye, Paul.