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Haiku 3

mother's grave lies untended by hands -- wildflowers grow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Bl Devnath
Date: 8/21/2012 12:33:00 PM
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Wonderfully penned about mother's grave of nature. Loved always, bl
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Cyndi Macmillan
Date: 8/18/2012 2:59:00 PM
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Is it okay to speak about what I see inside, my own aha here, see if what I see is what you meant? Is it haiku-crude? I love this. LOL. should have said that first. My aha is that you are speaking of more than wildflowers. That the children themselves are running wild, growing... so, is it my perspective distorting your intent, or did I see something ... deep? Hope your weekend is going well, ours is packed. Hugs, CYndi--thanks for the smiles you sent.
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David Williams
Date: 8/18/2012 2:39:00 PM
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Debbie great image...David
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Kash Poet
Date: 8/18/2012 2:23:00 PM
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Good one...I request you to revisit my latest couplet on Silence and read it and your comment.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/18/2012 11:03:00 AM
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This seems very modern, Debs. I likes it. (lies for lays)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/18/2012 9:03:00 AM
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Debbie, you have painted a vivid image with this wonderful haiku. I really like it. Love, Kim
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