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Haiku

flies trapped inside rice jar I ask him to leave

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Skat A
Date: 5/21/2016 10:24:00 AM
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Alvin, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Robert Pettit
Date: 1/26/2012 12:31:00 AM
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Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Nice short write.
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 1/24/2012 8:52:00 AM
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Congratulations on your featured poem this week Alvin. Love, Carol
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Jim Wilson
Date: 11/14/2011 2:39:00 PM
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Hi Alvin; this is a nice moment. It's a little short for me, though. And I wonder about L3 'him'? Since in L1 you have 'flies', plural, should L3 read 'I ask them to leave'? Again, it's a nice moment. Thanks, Jim
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