Haiku 32

the wild wind taps on the window panes -- the radiator pings

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2013 11:16:00 PM

I like all those sound effects, Debbie, well in your haiku, not in real life. haha

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/7/2013 7:06:00 AM

I don't know if that is good or bad..I hope that means that the radiator is working very well..Great descriptive Haiku ...I saw on the weather channel that your area is in for or will have some heavy snow..Sara

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/7/2013 8:07:00 AM

trying to show the COLD through the houses noises since brrrrrrrr I am not going OUT to find my haiku in the woods YET ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/7/2013 5:07:00 AM

Well done, Debbie ! - - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/7/2013 4:37:00 AM

really cool this is...will be in touch...

Joy Wellington

Date: 2/6/2013 10:12:00 PM

Debbie I am always blown away by whatever you write. I so enjoyed this Haiku...go ahead, keep teaching us. I am going to repost the poem I rewrite from your "The Sowing", for Black History Month, with your blessings I hope. One love, Joy Wells.

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/6/2013 7:51:00 PM

I love this! This is probably one of your best Haiku Debbie! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a powerful piece, written so perfectly, you ARE the queen of Haiku my friend! Very nicely done, Great Work!!

Joy Wellington
Date: 2/6/2013 10:08:00 PM

The WORD, Russell!!