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Haiku 32021

lake, black waterfowl - on bare tree; wings akimbo - comorant NOTE: I did get a video on my not-so-good cellphone (c)Deo, Nov.13, 2021

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/18/2021 10:15:00 PM

Beautiful imagery. Very well penned.. Blessings

Anil Deo
Date: 11/19/2021 10:21:00 PM

Thank you Sir. Many rich blessings

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/14/2021 11:36:00 AM

Only 3 lines with much said. Have a great/blessed day....................

Anil Deo
Date: 11/19/2021 10:21:00 PM

Thank you richly Sis Paula

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/12/2021 7:03:00 PM

Wow, in one small haiku I saw not one but two words I didn't know! 'akimbo' and 'comorant' - had to stop to look those up! Always glad for a chance to learn something new - and I love the imagery of this~

Anil Deo
Date: 11/12/2021 8:57:00 PM

Faithful (formally, agnostic Sister Universal) Michelle, you have come to the rescue - and U do that for many. When my best efforts get no comment, there YOU ALIGHT as if from ABOVE, with confetti and glitter on your wings, to give me assurance. Shalom, shalom