Haiku 28

soft thick moss
covers the fallen trunk --
drizzle falls

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Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 12/29/2012 1:54:00 AM

Wow wow and wow! You capture the moment like a Japanese master of haiku, here! Can I post it on my short poetry blog: fryktorein.blogspot.gr?

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 12/11/2012 10:52:00 AM

Ah! Lovely! Cynthia

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 12/10/2012 8:49:00 PM

Lovely snapshot, here. Hmmm... I wonder what the word spongey would do here? :) I was thinking that soft and thick is spongey and then against the drizzle? Hey, I just read a haiku by Kash that left me weak, seriously. Please, give it a visit, when you can. I think its beyond awesome. I think its GENIUS. Tell me what you think. Hugs, Cyndi oh, the haiku is called after my prayer. What floored me, moved me, was the zen of now held in layers of time. STUNNING.

Jack Horne

Date: 12/10/2012 1:21:00 PM

love this one, Debs. LOL, OK, I'll make the croc poem a nature one : )

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/10/2012 8:58:00 AM

Two in one. Lovely penned. Loved always, bl

Holly Moore

Date: 12/9/2012 12:37:00 PM

The words come off the page..beautifully written...Thanks for your comments on my page...Hugs, Holly Moore

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/8/2012 7:40:00 PM

Nice to have rain instead of all this snow. My poem fool's game is just from the top of my head. Needed to write something different instead of a nature theme. love phyl

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/8/2012 7:12:00 PM

The queen of Ku delivers another great one! I describes the weather we have here for two weeks and I'm craving a bit of sun. Depresses me beautifully! :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/7/2012 3:43:00 PM

like this,,, very much

Kathryn Collins

Date: 12/7/2012 7:41:00 AM

you've captured it in time forever. No photo can do this justice, only the real thing.

Constance La France

Date: 12/6/2012 1:18:00 PM

Debbie, I love this haiku, so utterly visual and peaceful. Constance

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/6/2012 11:55:00 AM

I can envision this beauty ma..Miss you.too.My hands are full with my little one yet its so.nice being here..big hug

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 12/6/2012 11:22:00 AM

So visual Debbie. I can almost hear the rain, smell the dampness in the air and see the bright green moss on the darkened wet trunk laying on the ground. A great write. Warm smiles, Connie