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Haiku 27

the brook bubbles toward the distant lake -- stones glisten

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Bl Devnath

Date: 12/10/2012 8:54:00 AM

Cute one enjoyed. Sometimes I do mistake because I am trying. Thanks for your suggestion. Loved always, bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/8/2012 7:29:00 AM

this is so good for the immagination Debbie...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/6/2012 1:15:00 AM

Why do you have two Haiku 27s???

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 12/6/2012 5:56:00 AM

cause I can't count LOL

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/5/2012 2:39:00 PM

your the best haiku master..pd

Kathryn Collins

Date: 12/5/2012 7:34:00 AM

I see it now on a crisp fall day.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 12/5/2012 6:57:00 AM

Thanks for my placement in the kindle the lights contest!! Jag

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/4/2012 8:59:00 PM

a perfect scene of quiet calm solitude in this haiku Debbie .. thankxx for my HM in lights .. now checking out your new contest luv ..there is no form listed for Rondolet .. which form shall we use to enter?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2012 2:49:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your nature scene..I bet that water is icy cold this time of year but beautiful..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/4/2012 2:30:00 PM

Very pretty picture, I can almost feel ice melting into the stream in early spring.

David Williams

Date: 12/4/2012 11:42:00 AM

Debbie great image, don't know if you went back and read my reply to your question, but don't think I am a saint I just love to help people, the one big thing I would love to improve is getting rid all the rubbish that constantly swims in my head!!!!!GGrrr

Constance La France

Date: 12/4/2012 8:48:00 AM

Debbie, this is a beautiful haiku, so visual and well done. Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2012 8:00:00 AM

Beautiful one, Debs!

Anne Rutherford

Date: 12/4/2012 5:22:00 AM

I see you beside a brook and thinking this awesome Haiku Debbie. That is what came to me as I read it. xx Anne

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 12/4/2012 4:59:00 AM

Each word and each line tells the beauty of the scene sketched by you in this superb Haiku. Great and beautiful write like the beauty of a lovely brook on a serene hills and thank my friend for your precious words on my PINK PINK PINK poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K .....Debbie Guzzi

Rollo West

Date: 12/3/2012 10:24:00 PM

Hi Debbie, what a great read this, full of all kinds of images. Rollo

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/3/2012 7:23:00 PM

I can see you really are the master of Haiku here on the Soup, this is an incredible poem my friend! You have written a stupendous and wondrous write Debbie! I loved reading every line of this illustrious piece, Great Work!!