Haiku 21

the sound
of a poet's pen dropping
during the hailstorm



NOTE: Ahhh back to good ole haiku once again :)

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 15, 2020 at 9:35 PM

What? ;), ...dropping for running for the door me. Love it. xomo

Andrea Dietrich

May 8, 2013 at 12:26 PM

Keep up the haiku. I love it!

Timothy Hicks

May 9, 2013 at 12:17 AM

Will do :) I've written hundreds of them, but a lot of them I don't care for.

David William Breidenthal

May 7, 2013 at 11:12 PM

love reading this poem tons of times. good work, poet! Maybe... it's called Writer's Block? haha : - )

Timothy Hicks

May 7, 2013 at 11:19 PM

Ha-ha... perhaps, perhaps! It can be read a lot of different ways I imagine. If you like haiku I've written many... it means a lot that you like it enough to read it more than once :)

Donna Jones

May 7, 2013 at 8:27 PM

I've left mine dropping a lot lately...great one Timothy...:-)

Timothy Hicks

May 7, 2013 at 10:36 PM

Thanks Donna :)

Poet Destroyer A

May 7, 2013 at 6:49 PM

Timothy, I like the sound... no time in thinking.... I tapped my pen all morning long. It's a good hailstorms stay away from this part of Texas... LINDA

Timothy Hicks

May 7, 2013 at 10:35 PM

I don't know much about Texas (other than it gets a lot hotter than Idaho). I have no idea what hail would be like over there...

Ndaba Sibanda

May 7, 2013 at 3:16 PM

Scintillating piece.

Timothy Hicks

May 7, 2013 at 10:35 PM

Thank you Ndaba, for the compliment :)

Richard Lamoureux

May 7, 2013 at 11:39 AM

That hail can be a bit startling.

David William Breidenthal

May 7, 2013 at 11:10 PM

haha

Timothy Hicks

May 7, 2013 at 10:34 PM

I was trying to writing about the hail and then I realized that I had no words that could accurately describe it (thus the reason why my pen dropped)...