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Haiku 21

the sound of a poet's pen dropping during the hailstorm NOTE: Ahhh back to good ole haiku once again :)

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/15/2020 9:35:00 PM

What? ;), ...dropping for running for the door me. Love it. xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2013 12:26:00 PM

Keep up the haiku. I love it!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/9/2013 12:17:00 AM

Will do :) I've written hundreds of them, but a lot of them I don't care for.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/7/2013 11:12:00 PM

love reading this poem tons of times. good work, poet! Maybe... it's called Writer's Block? haha : - )

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/7/2013 11:19:00 PM

Ha-ha... perhaps, perhaps! It can be read a lot of different ways I imagine. If you like haiku I've written many... it means a lot that you like it enough to read it more than once :)

Donna Jones

Date: 5/7/2013 8:27:00 PM

I've left mine dropping a lot lately...great one Timothy...:-)

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/7/2013 10:36:00 PM

Thanks Donna :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2013 6:49:00 PM

Timothy, I like the sound... no time in thinking.... I tapped my pen all morning long. It's a good hailstorms stay away from this part of Texas... LINDA

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/7/2013 10:35:00 PM

I don't know much about Texas (other than it gets a lot hotter than Idaho). I have no idea what hail would be like over there...

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 5/7/2013 3:16:00 PM

Scintillating piece.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/7/2013 10:35:00 PM

Thank you Ndaba, for the compliment :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/7/2013 11:39:00 AM

That hail can be a bit startling.

J.W. Earnings
Date: 5/7/2013 11:10:00 PM

haha

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/7/2013 10:34:00 PM

I was trying to writing about the hail and then I realized that I had no words that could accurately describe it (thus the reason why my pen dropped)...

J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/7/2013 7:58:00 AM

Wonderfully written, Tim! :DD -DWB

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/7/2013 10:31:00 PM

Thanks for your visit David!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/7/2013 2:50:00 AM

A good haiku, Timothy. - Haiku is fun forms to write. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/7/2013 10:31:00 PM

Indeed it is... thank you!