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Haiku 15-16

* prosperous land waits lost aimless upon the sea.... tired eyes search for light deep depth of the sea pounding fear from endless waves.... lighthouse stands distant * Contest ~ "In The Light Of Haiku" Poet ~ Rick Parise

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Date: 9/9/2011 11:13:00 PM
I see you are numbering your haiku. Good plan, Rick. It was nice seeing you and these haiku tonight. Don't see you enough lately!
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Date: 9/9/2011 9:41:00 AM
Good write, Rick! Best wishes in the contest. Kim
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Date: 9/9/2011 6:59:00 AM
Beautiful haiku....enjoyed.
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Date: 9/9/2011 3:45:00 AM
hey Rick very nicely done..David
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