Haiku

what can I reveal springtime flowers really need blossoms fill my heart

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 9/20/2014 1:39:00 PM

Hi James : Great Haiku about flowers.

Daver Austin

Date: 9/15/2014 3:25:00 PM

I really enjoy Haiku, and I love this one, James. Congrats on the selection. daver

James Fraser

Date: 7/23/2009 3:28:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku>>James

Brian Strand

Date: 7/6/2009 7:33:00 AM

It flows from your pen .Thank you for your welcome comment today Jim.Rgds Brian

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/16/2009 3:56:00 PM

ME TOOOO;)

Brian Strand

Date: 4/25/2009 10:46:00 AM

And your writing Jim.Nice one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commentsf

Brian Strand

Date: 3/27/2009 9:09:00 AM

You have gift for these beautiful haiku Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/24/2009 5:00:00 PM

this haiku is blossming,few words with nice message.i love flowers i love spring,i like this write

Belinda Parish

Date: 3/20/2009 10:53:00 PM

Love this Haiku James, especially the last line.

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/19/2009 11:28:00 PM

Nice haiku, the last line is great. keep them coming...Raul

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/17/2009 6:21:00 AM

Dear Jim, Welcome to the SOUP We will enjoy YOUR addition I enjoy writing Haiku and Senryu I can smell the Springtime and the Blossoms Superb Talent shows through this Poetic ART. Jim, Would YOU read my POEM "The Heart of a POET -- Speaks -- (Part 3) I would LOVE YOUR Comments Thank-YOU and Thank-YOU for Gracious Comment om"The Darkest Day" I will read more of YOU as time permits ALWAYS...HG