Haiku

what can I reveal springtime flowers really need blossoms fill my heart

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Date: 9/20/2014 1:39:00 PM
Hi James : Great Haiku about flowers.
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Date: 9/15/2014 3:25:00 PM
I really enjoy Haiku, and I love this one, James. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 7/23/2009 3:28:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku>>James
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Date: 7/6/2009 7:33:00 AM
It flows from your pen .Thank you for your welcome comment today Jim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/16/2009 3:56:00 PM
ME TOOOO;)
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Date: 4/25/2009 10:46:00 AM
And your writing Jim.Nice one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commentsf
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Date: 3/27/2009 9:09:00 AM
You have gift for these beautiful haiku Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/24/2009 5:00:00 PM
this haiku is blossming,few words with nice message.i love flowers i love spring,i like this write
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Date: 3/20/2009 10:53:00 PM
Love this Haiku James, especially the last line.
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Date: 3/19/2009 11:28:00 PM
Nice haiku, the last line is great. keep them coming...Raul
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Date: 3/17/2009 6:21:00 AM
Dear Jim, Welcome to the SOUP We will enjoy YOUR addition I enjoy writing Haiku and Senryu I can smell the Springtime and the Blossoms Superb Talent shows through this Poetic ART. Jim, Would YOU read my POEM "The Heart of a POET -- Speaks -- (Part 3) I would LOVE YOUR Comments Thank-YOU and Thank-YOU for Gracious Comment om"The Darkest Day" I will read more of YOU as time permits ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/16/2009 1:18:00 PM
The words made me think, James, and the image made me smile.
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Date: 3/16/2009 11:05:00 AM
I like the amibiguity and openness of this haiku. Thanks.
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Date: 3/16/2009 9:30:00 AM
wonderful haiku... ~ Arany
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Date: 3/16/2009 8:20:00 AM
What you can reveal, that spring flowers need?....you have already in your poetry!! True beauty!!
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Date: 3/16/2009 4:38:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku James...love the last line.
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