Haiku 13

summer garden talks listen to the floral strains weeds smother her wrath

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/15/2017 12:37:00 PM

I like the picture you painted, Tim....and the fitting metaphor, too. Let the flowers 'sing' with their beauty and calm the soul! // paul

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/12/2017 11:14:00 AM

Good Afternoon Tim. How true. Everyone is outdoors doing landscaping these days cleaning and grooming their yards. Your Haiku is in true form and count. Your theme and words deliver the scene and imagery. Well done entirely. Enjoy the afternoon.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2017 6:54:00 PM

I love it metaphorical like this!!

Barry Stebbings

Date: 6/11/2017 3:26:00 AM

Oh, yes, the weeds. Now, where are the flowers? Nice one,Tim. // Barry.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/10/2017 1:50:00 PM

time for some rain amidst the heat.. so fine, tim.. huggs

Darren White

Date: 6/10/2017 1:21:00 PM

In that heatwave it won't get any better! Away with haiku 13!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/10/2017 12:05:00 PM

You just explained my afternoon, rescuing the floral strains from the weeds! Nice poem!

Sara Ella

Date: 6/10/2017 9:57:00 AM

WEEDS! Yes they smother... Nice poem Tim :)

Jean Murray

Date: 6/10/2017 8:04:00 AM

You had me at "summer garden".

Jan Allison

Date: 6/10/2017 2:19:00 AM

Love it Tim!:-) hugs Jan xx