Haiku 13

summer garden talks listen to the floral strains weeds smother her wrath

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Date: 6/15/2017 12:37:00 PM
I like the picture you painted, Tim....and the fitting metaphor, too. Let the flowers 'sing' with their beauty and calm the soul! // paul
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Date: 6/12/2017 11:14:00 AM
Good Afternoon Tim. How true. Everyone is outdoors doing landscaping these days cleaning and grooming their yards. Your Haiku is in true form and count. Your theme and words deliver the scene and imagery. Well done entirely. Enjoy the afternoon.
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Date: 6/11/2017 6:54:00 PM
I love it metaphorical like this!!
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Date: 6/11/2017 3:26:00 AM
Oh, yes, the weeds. Now, where are the flowers? Nice one,Tim. // Barry.
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Date: 6/10/2017 1:50:00 PM
time for some rain amidst the heat.. so fine, tim.. huggs
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Date: 6/10/2017 1:21:00 PM
In that heatwave it won't get any better! Away with haiku 13!
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Date: 6/10/2017 12:05:00 PM
You just explained my afternoon, rescuing the floral strains from the weeds! Nice poem!
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Date: 6/10/2017 9:57:00 AM
WEEDS! Yes they smother... Nice poem Tim :)
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Date: 6/10/2017 8:04:00 AM
You had me at "summer garden".
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Date: 6/10/2017 2:19:00 AM
Love it Tim!:-) hugs Jan xx
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