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Haiku 13 - God's Pledge

fox and rabbit raptor wings earth and sky and hell - god's forsaken dream cut flowers spent upon the ground leaves of brown and gold - trusts in life anew blue robin eggs lay waiting red breast's warmth and love - god redeems a pledge

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2023 5:13:00 PM

love the symbolism of these three Kus. Great job!

Francis J Grasso
Date: 2/16/2023 6:52:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea! ...Fran

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/13/2023 7:58:00 AM

For some reason I feel this one is about the death of someone close. I enjoyed reading these Haiku today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Francis J Grasso
Date: 2/18/2023 6:58:00 AM

Thank you, Sara. ...Fran

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/23/2022 6:02:00 PM

A delightful chain, Francis ~

Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/24/2022 3:15:00 AM

Thank you, Line... I have my syllable count reverse on this one, but then I was always a bit dyslectic!... Fran