Haiku

tornado on the plain eats voraciously cattle stampede Modified haiku form for Non Traditional poetry contest.

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Joseph May

Date: 5/17/2021 7:49:00 PM

I like your depiction of the tornado as a ravenous beast, Very nicely penned Warren..

Warren Doll
Date: 5/23/2021 1:33:00 PM

Hi Joseph, I'm glad that you liked it and for your comment and visit~ Warren

Ann Foster

Date: 5/15/2021 7:41:00 PM

I would run for sure... Well done. Ann

Warren Doll
Date: 5/23/2021 1:30:00 PM

Ann. thanks so much for your visit and compliment~ Warren

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/29/2021 8:28:00 PM

Wow!

Warren Doll
Date: 5/10/2021 4:46:00 PM

Kim, Thanks for your positive comment and visit.~ Warren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/29/2021 1:49:00 PM

Reads like a good contender to me ..Way to go. It would be scary to see a tornado way off and know that it will probably come your way. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Warren Doll
Date: 4/2/2021 6:25:00 AM

Hi Sara, thanks for your comments and visit. Best wishes~ Warren

Eve Roper

Date: 3/24/2021 8:27:00 PM

Great imagery , Warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 3/26/2021 8:27:00 AM

Eve, thanks for your positive comment and visit~ Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/23/2021 10:42:00 AM

I love the metaphor " eats voraciously" Such a very apt image you created Warren, Well done!!

Warren Doll
Date: 3/26/2021 8:25:00 AM

Thanks so much, Mike. I'm glad you enjoyed it~ Warren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/22/2021 6:42:00 AM

This would be Cowastrophic! Sorry, I couldn’t resist. ;0)

Warren Doll
Date: 3/23/2021 6:41:00 AM

Richard, you made me lol, Thanks for the visit~ Warren

Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/20/2021 8:15:00 PM

Warren, Very nice phenomenon in turbulent prose. "Is there an F5...what would that be like?" "Finger of God" -Richard

Warren Doll
Date: 3/21/2021 12:00:00 PM

Richard, thanks for you positive comments and visit, Best to you~ Warren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2021 3:59:00 PM

gosh, I am seeing lots of them in four lines. I think i did not get the memo... anyway, nicely done!

Quoth Theraven
Date: 3/20/2021 8:13:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I didn't get the memo either. -R