Haiku

tornado
on the plain
eats voraciously
cattle stampede


Modified haiku form for Non Traditional poetry contest.

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Joseph May

May 17, 2021 at 7:49 PM

I like your depiction of the tornado as a ravenous beast, Very nicely penned Warren..

Warren Doll

May 23, 2021 at 1:33 PM

Hi Joseph, I'm glad that you liked it and for your comment and visit~ Warren

Ann Foster

May 15, 2021 at 7:41 PM

I would run for sure... Well done. Ann

Warren Doll

May 23, 2021 at 1:30 PM

Ann. thanks so much for your visit and compliment~ Warren

Kim Rodrigues

April 29, 2021 at 8:28 PM

Wow!

Warren Doll

May 10, 2021 at 4:46 PM

Kim, Thanks for your positive comment and visit.~ Warren

Sara Kendrick

March 29, 2021 at 1:49 PM

Reads like a good contender to me ..Way to go. It would be scary to see a tornado way off and know that it will probably come your way. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Warren Doll

April 2, 2021 at 6:25 AM

Hi Sara, thanks for your comments and visit. Best wishes~ Warren