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* * pure snow has fallen * the trees are wearing white gowns * wind whispers winter * * * * _____________________ January 21, 2021 Poetry/haiku Copyright Protected, ID 01-1322-690-21 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, All Yours (Jan. 21) Contest 901 sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/22/2021 First Place

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Date: 1/22/2021 2:07:00 PM
Creative Ku. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 1/22/2021 7:49:00 PM
Sara, thanks for the compliment on my haiku _Constance
Date: 1/22/2021 10:46:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and your alliteration using "w" really carries the sound and feeling of the wind. Congrats and kudos on your first place win Constance. Blessings and hugs to you!
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Date: 1/22/2021 7:50:00 PM
Sam, thanks for the nice comment and compliment and congratulations _Constance
Date: 1/21/2021 8:48:00 PM
Your imagery is the imagery of a master Constance.
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Date: 1/22/2021 7:50:00 PM
Caren, thanks so much for the comment _Constance
Date: 1/21/2021 5:38:00 PM
Beautifully described winter scenery here with just seventeen syllables.
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Date: 1/22/2021 7:51:00 PM
Robert, thank you so much for the compliment on my haiku _Constance
Date: 1/21/2021 12:12:00 PM
A beautiful winter image Constance, I love to see a good fall of snow, sadly we haven't had any yet. Hope you're well. Tom
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Date: 1/21/2021 4:23:00 PM
Tom, thank you for the visit and the beautiful and comment, we have plenty as it snowed all day here _Constance
Date: 1/21/2021 10:17:00 AM
absolutely stunning and I love the liberal use of alliteration. Have just written a winter haiku but it is nothing compared to this beauty!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/21/2021 4:24:00 PM
Jan, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate a lot _Constance
Date: 1/21/2021 9:27:00 AM
Beautiful images of winter in every line! Nicely done, Constance.
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Date: 1/21/2021 9:29:00 AM
Vijay, thanks for the beautiful and the compliment _Constance

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