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Haiku

 
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pure snow has fallen       *
the trees are wearing white gowns *
                         wind whispers winter    *    
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January  21, 2021


Poetry/haiku
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1322-690-21
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, All Yours (Jan. 21) Contest 901
sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/22/2021

First Place

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Sara Kendrick Date: 1/22/2021 2:07:00 PM Creative Ku. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/22/2021 7:49:00 PM Sara, thanks for the compliment on my haiku _Constance

Sam Kauffman Date: 1/22/2021 10:46:00 AM Beautiful imagery and your alliteration using "w" really carries the sound and feeling of the wind. Congrats and kudos on your first place win Constance. Blessings and hugs to you! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/22/2021 7:50:00 PM Sam, thanks for the nice comment and compliment and congratulations _Constance

Caren Krutsinger Date: 1/21/2021 8:48:00 PM Your imagery is the imagery of a master Constance. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/22/2021 7:50:00 PM Caren, thanks so much for the comment _Constance

Robert Pettit Date: 1/21/2021 5:38:00 PM Beautifully described winter scenery here with just seventeen syllables. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/22/2021 7:51:00 PM Robert, thank you so much for the compliment on my haiku _Constance

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/21/2021 12:12:00 PM A beautiful winter image Constance, I love to see a good fall of snow, sadly we haven't had any yet. Hope you're well. Tom Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/21/2021 4:23:00 PM Tom, thank you for the visit and the beautiful and comment, we have plenty as it snowed all day here _Constance

Jan Allison Date: 1/21/2021 10:17:00 AM absolutely stunning and I love the liberal use of alliteration. Have just written a winter haiku but it is nothing compared to this beauty!!:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/21/2021 4:24:00 PM Jan, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate a lot _Constance

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/21/2021 9:27:00 AM Beautiful images of winter in every line! Nicely done, Constance. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 1/21/2021 9:29:00 AM Vijay, thanks for the beautiful and the compliment _Constance