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read this story from a mother who took her autistic son to the zoo to see the animals – I really like this story because I believe that special needs children and their parents see the world in a different light. I tried to hint at this in the haiku. I also work with two brothers who have autism and their joy and enthusiasm for life is invigorating to me. Here is part of the quote from the mother:

“We did get to see some fantastic animals before he started getting upset. He particularly loved the lions and cheetahs. The elephant bored him to the extent that he barely looked at it even though it was close to the fence. Instead he and his brother were fixated with the bamboo fencing around a tree in front of the elephant enclosure, “bamboo, bamboo!” *sigh*” http://autismandoughtisms.wordpress.com/2011/01/25/one-zoo-two-children-and-a-clock/

bamboo zoo fencing, protecting, connecting -- joy to autistic boy David Meade 10/28/2014

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Cynthia Jones

Date: 2/4/2015 8:45:00 AM

A definite 7 from me David. I have a cousin I used to babysit that has autism. Just as soon as he heard my voice through the intercom of his apartment building, he always met me at the door. He wouldn't give me the chance to take my jacket off and he'd have his arms wrapped tightly around my neck, giving me a hug. He always loved it, when I sat down in the rocking chair and read to him. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Margaret Franceschini

Date: 11/10/2014 8:32:00 PM

yes David, you describe exactly the nature of autism. I have worked with Autism the past 8 years and each day is a new experience I live through them. Though I teach them, they in turn bring me into a world of joyful discoveries.

David Meade
Date: 11/11/2014 8:08:00 AM

Thank-you Margaret, I am blown away at how many lives Autism touch . . . I thank-you from the bottom of my heart for your willingness to teach -- and in the process be enriched -- the children of Autism. All the very best

Dan Helppi

Date: 10/31/2014 11:05:00 PM

Dang good Haiku, My nephew is autistic and joyful, he loves trains and sports, I love watching his uninhibited ways especially in a restaurant, he will go up to a diner's table and start eating! Sounds very rude to us but to him it makes sense, he's hungry and there is food to eat. People are nice, I might add!

David Meade
Date: 11/1/2014 11:41:00 AM

I love that story -- makes me want to try it!! Thank-you for your time and feedback, it is much appreciated and I look forward to reading your poems. All the very best.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/29/2014 7:17:00 PM

Such a sweet haiku indeed. Your description gave us a wonderful background incidentally. The imagery is vibrant and puts a smile on my face. Thank you. :) Always, Laura

David Meade
Date: 10/29/2014 8:53:00 PM

thank-you Laura, they are special children and adults. All the best my friend.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/29/2014 3:31:00 PM

That is beautiful; animals work miracles with people who, "see" and "hear" differently; it's their job and they do it well. We don't appreciate other animals, as we should.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/29/2014 12:04:00 AM

yes, many of them love being "boxed in" There was a movie about a famous woman who invented the system of enclosing cattle before slaughter to make them feel safe. i forgot her name but it was like an HBO movie, really good, and she came up with the idea for being autistic and enjoying being enclosed.

David Meade
Date: 10/29/2014 8:54:00 PM

I looked up Temple today and was amazed. I ordered some of her books. Thanks Andrea and Jan.

David Meade
Date: 10/29/2014 11:16:00 AM

This sounds very interesting, I plan on watching the movie -- thanks for all of your comments and suggestions . . . as you can see, I am not a poet but only a lover of words, no formal training on writing or style or sentence structure. Any help -- I am a willing student.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2014 3:32:00 AM

Her name is Temple Grandin Andrea - I too have seen the brilliant film! Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2014 6:57:00 PM

I have worked with Asperger's students for over 14 years - a great insightful write into 'their' world:-) hugs jan xx

David Meade
Date: 10/28/2014 8:45:00 PM

Jan, thank-you for sharing . . . your work with these students is very important to them and their families. A very high calling . . . I can tell by your words that you care very much about your work and students. May you always find the love and joy in touching other peoples lives. Thank-you for touching mine . . . all the best.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/28/2014 9:05:00 AM

Beautiful piece, David. I understand this very well as someone close to my family was autistic and we learned a lot from him. It was so fascinating to observe him because while his focus was very different, he brought a whole new perspective/dimension to simple things that we otherwise would probably not pay any attention to. Thank you for shring this gem! Pandita

David Meade
Date: 10/28/2014 10:26:00 AM

I also work with two brothers who have autism and their joy and enthusiasm for life is invigorating to me. All the best.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/28/2014 9:05:00 AM

Nice Haiku Dave. I was privileged to spend several months with a family who had an autistic son. He brought much joy to his family and he won my heart very quickly.

David Meade
Date: 10/28/2014 10:29:00 AM

Autism is a strange world -- and I know it can be a real daily struggle for families but they are a blessings. Thanks for reading and I enjoy your reading your verses. All the best.