Haiku

haiku

warming days and nights
tree full of cherry blossoms 
cicadas first stir

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/21/2019 6:19:00 PM

Warren, I miss the cicadas. But my aim is improving. A very lush Haiku. -Richard

Warren Doll
Date: 4/6/2020 12:50:00 PM

Thanks for your visit, Raven. ~ Warren

J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/2/2019 6:27:00 AM

Super great haiku!:) Simply brilliant!

Warren Doll
Date: 8/5/2019 10:34:00 AM

J.W., thanks for your wonderful comments. Best Wishes, Warren.

Deb Radke

Date: 8/1/2019 6:22:00 AM

Hello, Warren. As always, your haiku is exquisite. So much said in so few words. Best wishes. Deb

Warren Doll
Date: 8/5/2019 10:37:00 AM

Deb, thanks for your flattering comments and visit, All the best~ Warren

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/31/2019 1:58:00 PM

So touchingly... beautiful... Panagiota

Warren Doll
Date: 8/5/2019 10:40:00 AM

Hi Panagiota, I am glad that you liked it. Thanks for visiting~ Warren

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/3/2019 1:28:00 PM

Nice Summertime poem!

Warren Doll
Date: 7/6/2019 5:38:00 PM

Hi Kim, I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks so much for your visit and comment. Allthe best~ Warren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2019 9:19:00 AM

Beautiful!

Warren Doll
Date: 6/26/2019 10:18:00 AM

Richard, I'm glad that you liked it. All the best~ Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/2/2019 6:27:00 AM

Springtime imagery abounds Warren, Lovely !!

Warren Doll
Date: 6/2/2019 2:55:00 PM

Hi Mike, So glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/24/2019 7:56:00 PM

I got such a clear and comforting image. Great Haiku Warren

Warren Doll
Date: 5/28/2019 9:56:00 AM

Thanks so much ,Allen. I'm glad that you liked it and for your comments. All the best~ Warren

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/21/2019 9:55:00 PM

Excellent haiku - written like a master! Bravo, Warren! Best wishes. Pandita

Warren Doll
Date: 5/24/2019 7:53:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comments, Pandita. All the best~ Warren

Bernard Chan

Date: 5/19/2019 10:10:00 AM

Wonderfully evocative and full of optimism about the new season.

Warren Doll
Date: 5/24/2019 7:51:00 PM

Thanks so much ,Bernard,

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/9/2019 8:41:00 AM

- Beautiful picture, Warren :) - (we got some snow in May ... and ice cold wind ... I'm waiting for the summer :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll
Date: 5/9/2019 11:38:00 AM

Anne-Lise it's always good to hear from you. Snow and ice cold wind in May? How can anyone dispute climate change. Glad you liked the haiku and I hope it brought some poem warmth to you. Summer will arrive shortly. Sending a bunch of big hugs to you~ Warren :)