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Haiku 102 - For Contest

Haiku 102 – for contest rogue waves gaping maw curls about listing vessels swallowing sunlight 2.10/2016 submitted to – Haiku 102 – Poetry Contest sponsor – Nathan D.

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Steve Grammatico

Date: 2/19/2016 6:04:00 AM

I like all the placements, John, but I would have ranked this effort higher. Congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2016 7:41:00 PM

this is amazing. Congrats for the win.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/17/2016 1:34:00 PM

John,congratulations on your win!!!! Hugs Eve

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/17/2016 7:35:00 AM

John, congratulations on your excellent win, for your outstanding Haiku! Sandra

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/17/2016 1:48:00 AM

Congratulations for win with this excellent haiku. A 7

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/16/2016 10:51:00 PM

Congrats on ur great win with this awesome haiku John.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/16/2016 7:01:00 PM

Haven't read this one yet, but the third line is really impact-ful and imaginative. Not a good haiku to read to those that have a fear of the ocean!