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the see-through floor and the skeleton walls — outdated cobwebs 5/29/2018

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Date: 5/30/2018 11:23:00 AM
this reminds me of the ship in the water and people able to see through the polyethylene skeleton walls..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2018 1:34:00 PM
Thanks for sharing, Eve! Love it! <3
Date: 5/30/2018 8:20:00 AM
Hanging webs of a time gone by...Nice haiku...All the best Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2018 8:31:00 AM
Thank you, Arturo!

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