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peek-a-boo sun my thoughts are drifting with the clouds May 26, 2018 For Mick Talbot's Haiga - Haiku - Theme Summer - 5-7-5 - Please Read The Rules Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/5/2018 8:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Well done.
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Date: 6/3/2018 6:32:00 PM
We are both drifting off I see Andrea. I really like this one.
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Date: 6/2/2018 10:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the summer haiku contest with this fun true haiku. I enjoyed it.
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Date: 6/2/2018 10:42:00 AM
This is a real haiku, Andrea...definitely should have been amongst the first placed ones. I have read several beautiful descriptive entries, but that is not good enough to qualify them as haiku. Regards // paul
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Date: 6/2/2018 9:06:00 AM
What a beautiful haiku, Andie! Congratulations, my friend, on your win! Hope you are enjoying the weekend! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 6/2/2018 7:08:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/29/2018 10:48:00 AM
Thought i'd better take this in, Andrea, its different, and creates lots of images, love it..
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Date: 5/28/2018 6:29:00 AM
Awh this weather makes me beam. Such a beautiful poem...expresses joy. -JWE
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:23:00 AM
Lovely Andrea, how true, you watch the clouds drifting and so does your mind. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 5/26/2018 10:53:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Andrea. I've enjoyed special summer moments like these. Best for a win! ~Susan
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Date: 5/26/2018 10:13:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea.
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Date: 5/26/2018 9:00:00 PM
Hi Andrea, You've penned a good haiku with lovely imagery. I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/26/2018 4:27:00 PM
A delightful haiku, Andrea! This would also work well for the "sky" contest. Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/26/2018 3:56:00 PM
Great imagery ..I see the hide and seek in the sky...best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 5/26/2018 2:07:00 PM
- Nice one, Andrea - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/26/2018 1:59:00 PM
perfect, Andrea, hard to focus on a beautiful breezy day.
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Date: 5/26/2018 1:18:00 PM
Andrea.. this is so sweet, just like you
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Date: 5/26/2018 11:49:00 AM
floating by... great imagery Andrea..
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Date: 5/26/2018 11:47:00 AM
super imagery Andrea, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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