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Haiku

tire swing dips in brook laughing children get relief… water cools burnt skin May 23, 2018

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 7/2/2018 10:53:00 AM
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In India the sight is very common. I connect so easily. God bless. A great haiku.Love-rajat.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/12/2018 5:59:00 PM
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Great descriptive Haiku! I enjoyed this :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/11/2018 8:20:00 AM
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Enjoyed reading your work. I can see the scene. Sara
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Wilma Neels
Date: 6/5/2018 2:47:00 PM
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Hey Carolyn, hope you are doing well! Congratulations on your placement in the contest as well ;)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/3/2018 9:54:00 PM
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Congrats on your top win, Carolyn.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/3/2018 5:08:00 PM
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way to go, my friend. BIG congrats to you.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/2/2018 9:49:00 PM
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Congratulations on your placement in the summer haiku contest.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2018 8:20:00 AM
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This is a little slice of perfect.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2018 7:14:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/1/2018 12:47:00 AM
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“You are never too old to become younger!”
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Elaine George
Date: 5/30/2018 3:16:00 PM
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A great Haiku, Carolyn. Elaine
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/28/2018 4:51:00 PM
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Oh you make this sound so refreshing. I miss days like this, Carolyn.
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 5/28/2018 4:39:00 AM
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Delightful poem..so much childhood memories in 3 lines. Wow :) good job!! (: -JWE
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Constance La France
Date: 5/27/2018 6:04:00 AM
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Carolyn, this is just so lovely, I saw it in my mind, we had one of those at Grandpa's cottage ~
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/26/2018 1:22:00 PM
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Oh, Carolyn, I love this image of summer, you put a wonderful picture in my mind this afternoon, I'm there! Hope you have a wonderful Memorial Day weekend. John
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Arturo Michael
Date: 5/24/2018 4:49:00 AM
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A hot summer down by the river...Nice haiku...All the best Carolyn
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/23/2018 9:42:00 PM
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Lovely image Caroline that many will identify with, myself included, happy days. Tom.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 5/23/2018 9:28:00 PM
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Ohh, the simple, sweet pleasures of summer! Beautiful sensory and nostalgic imagery, Carolyn. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/23/2018 9:12:00 PM
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I can see it and hear it! xomo :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2018 6:54:00 PM
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gorgeous imagery Carolyn:-) hugs jan xx
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