Haiku

longest sunny days 
shimmering rainbow koi pond
garden fresh basil

seasonshaiku

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Line Gauthier

June 3, 2018 at 9:48 PM

Congrats on your win, Warren.

Warren Doll

June 4, 2018 at 7:18 AM

Thanks very much, Line

Andrea Dietrich

June 3, 2018 at 5:04 PM

Nice summer images, Warren. Congrats in the contest.

Warren Doll

June 4, 2018 at 7:17 AM

Thanks so much, Andrea

Susan Gentry

June 2, 2018 at 9:45 PM

Congratulations on your win with this true haiku!! Well done.

Warren Doll

June 3, 2018 at 2:47 PM

Thanks so much, Susan

Kim Rodrigues

June 2, 2018 at 5:49 PM

A beautiful setting, Warren! Congratulations!

Warren Doll

June 3, 2018 at 2:45 PM

Thanks so much, Kim

Mick Talbot

June 2, 2018 at 5:04 PM

haiku perfection, congratulations Warren. Mick

Warren Doll

June 3, 2018 at 2:44 PM

Thank you so much for your most positive comment and congratulations . As I've been telling everyone, this came as an unexpected and pleasant surprise. Warren

Tom Cunningham

June 2, 2018 at 12:23 PM

Lovely image Warren, congratulations. Tom

Warren Doll

June 2, 2018 at 3:29 PM

Thank You for your compliment and congratulations, Tom

Constance La France

June 2, 2018 at 9:31 AM

Warren, congratulations on your win in the contest, your haiku is so dreamy with serenity ~

Warren Doll

June 2, 2018 at 9:40 AM

Thanks so much Broken Wings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 2, 2018 at 7:16 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

June 2, 2018 at 8:51 AM

I see that you won too. I'm in good company, Thanks so much Anne-Lise. Big hug sent your way. Warren:)

Mike Gentile

June 2, 2018 at 7:13 AM

Congrats on your No.! Placement Warren, So well deserved, Keep writing !!!

Warren Doll

June 2, 2018 at 8:46 AM

Mike, this comes as a very pleasant surprise. Thank You and I will keep writing,

Mike Gentile

May 16, 2018 at 12:40 PM

I like fresh basil in a cocktail, Warren, Then the Koi pond is even more shimmering !!! Wonderful Haiku !!!

Mike Gentile

May 17, 2018 at 3:09 PM

There is a Basil cocktail made with freshly muddled Basil, Vodka, Simple Syrup and Lime, It is summery and delicious and the fragrance is wonderful!!

Warren Doll

May 17, 2018 at 9:15 AM

What type of cocktail? I love basil, but I have never heard of it used in a cocktail. Yes, cocktails do make things appear more shimmering-LOL. Glad that you enjoyed the haiku, Mike