Haiku

longest sunny days shimmering rainbow koi pond garden fresh basil

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/3/2018 9:48:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 6/4/2018 7:18:00 AM

Thanks very much, Line

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2018 5:04:00 PM

Nice summer images, Warren. Congrats in the contest.

Warren Doll
Date: 6/4/2018 7:17:00 AM

Thanks so much, Andrea

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/2/2018 9:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this true haiku!! Well done.

Warren Doll
Date: 6/3/2018 2:47:00 PM

Thanks so much, Susan

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/2/2018 5:49:00 PM

A beautiful setting, Warren! Congratulations!

Warren Doll
Date: 6/3/2018 2:45:00 PM

Thanks so much, Kim

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/2/2018 5:04:00 PM

haiku perfection, congratulations Warren. Mick

Warren Doll
Date: 6/3/2018 2:44:00 PM

Thank you so much for your most positive comment and congratulations . As I've been telling everyone, this came as an unexpected and pleasant surprise. Warren

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/2/2018 12:23:00 PM

Lovely image Warren, congratulations. Tom

Warren Doll
Date: 6/2/2018 3:29:00 PM

Thank You for your compliment and congratulations, Tom

Constance La France

Date: 6/2/2018 9:31:00 AM

Warren, congratulations on your win in the contest, your haiku is so dreamy with serenity ~

Warren Doll
Date: 6/2/2018 9:40:00 AM

Thanks so much Broken Wings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2018 7:16:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll
Date: 6/2/2018 8:51:00 AM

I see that you won too. I'm in good company, Thanks so much Anne-Lise. Big hug sent your way. Warren:)

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/2/2018 7:13:00 AM

Congrats on your No.! Placement Warren, So well deserved, Keep writing !!!

Warren Doll
Date: 6/2/2018 8:46:00 AM

Mike, this comes as a very pleasant surprise. Thank You and I will keep writing,

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/16/2018 12:40:00 PM

I like fresh basil in a cocktail, Warren, Then the Koi pond is even more shimmering !!! Wonderful Haiku !!!

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/17/2018 3:09:00 PM

There is a Basil cocktail made with freshly muddled Basil, Vodka, Simple Syrup and Lime, It is summery and delicious and the fragrance is wonderful!!

Warren Doll
Date: 5/17/2018 9:15:00 AM

What type of cocktail? I love basil, but I have never heard of it used in a cocktail. Yes, cocktails do make things appear more shimmering-LOL. Glad that you enjoyed the haiku, Mike

Robertina B.

Date: 5/15/2018 7:24:00 PM

A lovely haiku, Warren!! I absolutely love fresh basil!!

Warren Doll
Date: 5/16/2018 8:13:00 AM

Hi Robertina, Always nice to hear from you. Thanks for your positive comment. I love fresh basil too and plant a large pot of it every summer.