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butterflies and bees berries burst sweetly on tongue daisies everywhere 5/14/18

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Date: 6/3/2018 9:45:00 PM
Well done, Michelle. Congrats on your win.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/4/2018 2:27:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 6/3/2018 5:00:00 PM
Lovely summer images. Congrats, Michelle.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/4/2018 2:27:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Andrea!
Date: 6/2/2018 9:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this true haiku in the summer haiku contest!! A fave for me.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/4/2018 2:28:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed it, Susan!
Date: 6/2/2018 4:44:00 PM
A pleasant surprise, a lovely twist congratulations Michelle. Mick
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/4/2018 2:29:00 PM
I am so grateful for you kind comment, Mick!
Date: 6/2/2018 4:35:00 PM
Aw, you can’t get more summery than this Michelle, in fact if this was a drink it would be called “syrup of summer”. Well done, great haiku.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/4/2018 2:29:00 PM
Hmm, thanks for the idea - I might use that!
Date: 6/2/2018 7:18:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/4/2018 2:30:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, for your kind comment!
Date: 6/2/2018 6:37:00 AM
A lovely scene! Congrats, Michelle!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/4/2018 2:31:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed it, Kim!
Date: 5/20/2018 11:23:00 AM
What an excellent haiku, full of beautiful imagery with a lovely surprise ending! Hugs. Pandita
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/20/2018 11:54:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Pandita-
Date: 5/16/2018 7:35:00 AM
Sounds like the start of a great summer to me! Well done!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/18/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thank you - hope your summer is great!
Date: 5/16/2018 2:59:00 AM
Nicely done...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/20/2018 1:55:00 AM
You bet...
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/18/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thank you, appreciate that!
Date: 5/15/2018 11:25:00 AM
A little piece of summer rolled neatly into three short lines. Thanks for sharing Michelle!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/18/2018 8:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dean!
Date: 5/14/2018 11:07:00 AM
lovely images of summer:-) hugs jan xx
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/15/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thank you, appreciate your comment!
Date: 5/14/2018 10:35:00 AM
Very nice Michelle :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/15/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi!