Haiku

~~haiku~~ in the sea of love where the tides caress my soul lovers on the shore May.07.2018 haiku - Theme sea - ocean - 5-7-5 Sponsored by: Mick Talbot

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Paul Callus

Date: 5/16/2018 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine romantic win, WW. Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 5/13/2018 5:02:00 PM

beautiful visuals in both poem and video! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2018 3:18:00 PM

Back with my congrast, WW. Keep up with the romantic pen.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/12/2018 2:56:00 PM

Awesome haiku, ^WW^,congratulations on your great win,love the imagery ... eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2018 8:38:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great 4th place in the contest, W.W. :) - Happy Weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/11/2018 11:55:00 PM

Congrats on your win, WW. Well done.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/10/2018 1:12:00 PM

Hello Winged. I enjoyed the theme as love is for one and all. You very much stayed true to the format's voice and tone. All is well within this entry and its execution. Best of luck with the contest John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2018 8:47:00 AM

WW, the romantic in me loves this one!!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 5/8/2018 5:40:00 PM

I reminds me of the movie Burt Lancaster from here to eternity...Nice..

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/8/2018 9:24:00 AM

Very nice Haiku WW! :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/7/2018 3:17:00 PM

Love how the words paint the picture of your poem..

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/7/2018 3:08:00 PM

My first thought is of all the sand that will wind up under their pants. Is that you with my girlfriend? You old romantic:)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/7/2018 10:51:00 AM

sweet passion written all over the page, WW... fabulous!..huggs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/7/2018 10:46:00 AM

Excellent imagery presented in a few precious words..best for a win, WW!

Maria Williams

Date: 5/7/2018 8:13:00 AM

Beautifully expressed and depicted my Winged Friend. Both the image and Haiku say it all. To echo Victor - I'm not sure which I liked better...Maria Hugs :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/7/2018 8:06:00 AM

Nice...I like it...

John Lawless

Date: 5/7/2018 7:23:00 AM

Very nice .... a great visual even without the picture.