Haiku

waves cascading swift pebbles surfacing the shore turquoise blue heaven May 6, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2018 2:59:00 PM

This is very pretty, Laura. Congrats for your win.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/12/2018 6:24:00 PM

Many congrats LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/12/2018 4:04:00 PM

Lovely! Congrats!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/12/2018 2:27:00 PM

Sounds divine :) Congratulations on your win! xomo

Eve Roper

Date: 5/12/2018 2:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your great first place in the contest, Laura, the imagery and theme is fabulous hugs sweetie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2018 8:27:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great first place in the contest, Laura :) - Happy Weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/11/2018 11:12:00 PM

Back with well deserved congrats, Laura.

Mick Talbot

Date: 5/11/2018 10:27:00 PM

Congratulations LuLoo, great haiku love the pebbles surfing! heaven? Proper noun, should that be an uppercase h, lol, blame Gregory, however, in the context of the haiku it is a metaphor whether it is the sea or the sky being described. :)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 5/8/2018 11:06:00 PM

A gorgeous and imaginative write, Luloo, and so much imagery with so few words - marvelous Haiku! (Oh, I suppose that should have been a small "h", lol). Best wishes for the contest, my friend! I must visit more often ... I am so busy taking care of my folks and trying to record an album by next December, (and now the outdoor obligations and desires of summer), and I get VERY little time to read and comment, but it is one of my favorite things. I must manage time better. Blessings! :-) <3

Mick Talbot
Date: 5/11/2018 10:18:00 PM

With respect Gregory, it is out of respect to the Japanese they don't use capitals, plus if I am flicking through other poets poetry and I see haiku as the title I quickly move one. Offended but I'll get over it, take care of your loved ones! Mick

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/6/2018 11:47:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Laura. Lovely.