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waves cascading swift pebbles surfacing the shore turquoise blue heaven May 6, 2018

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Date: 5/13/2018 2:59:00 PM
This is very pretty, Laura. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 5/12/2018 6:24:00 PM
Many congrats LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/12/2018 4:04:00 PM
Lovely! Congrats!
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:27:00 PM
Sounds divine :) Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your great first place in the contest, Laura, the imagery and theme is fabulous hugs sweetie
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Date: 5/12/2018 8:27:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great first place in the contest, Laura :) - Happy Weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/11/2018 11:12:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Laura.
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Date: 5/11/2018 10:27:00 PM
Congratulations LuLoo, great haiku love the pebbles surfing! heaven? Proper noun, should that be an uppercase h, lol, blame Gregory, however, in the context of the haiku it is a metaphor whether it is the sea or the sky being described. :)
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Date: 5/8/2018 11:06:00 PM
A gorgeous and imaginative write, Luloo, and so much imagery with so few words - marvelous Haiku! (Oh, I suppose that should have been a small "h", lol). Best wishes for the contest, my friend! I must visit more often ... I am so busy taking care of my folks and trying to record an album by next December, (and now the outdoor obligations and desires of summer), and I get VERY little time to read and comment, but it is one of my favorite things. I must manage time better. Blessings! :-) <3
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/11/2018 10:18:00 PM
With respect Gregory, it is out of respect to the Japanese they don't use capitals, plus if I am flicking through other poets poetry and I see haiku as the title I quickly move one. Offended but I'll get over it, take care of your loved ones! Mick
Date: 5/6/2018 11:47:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Laura. Lovely.
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