Haiku

waves cascading swift pebbles surfacing the shore turquoise blue heaven May 6, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/13/2018 2:59:00 PM
This is very pretty, Laura. Congrats for your win.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/12/2018 6:24:00 PM
Many congrats LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 5/12/2018 4:04:00 PM
Lovely! Congrats!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/12/2018 2:27:00 PM
Sounds divine :) Congratulations on your win! xomo
Login to Reply
Date: 5/12/2018 2:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your great first place in the contest, Laura, the imagery and theme is fabulous hugs sweetie
Login to Reply
Date: 5/12/2018 8:27:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great first place in the contest, Laura :) - Happy Weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/11/2018 11:12:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Laura.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/11/2018 10:27:00 PM
Congratulations LuLoo, great haiku love the pebbles surfing! heaven? Proper noun, should that be an uppercase h, lol, blame Gregory, however, in the context of the haiku it is a metaphor whether it is the sea or the sky being described. :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/8/2018 11:06:00 PM
A gorgeous and imaginative write, Luloo, and so much imagery with so few words - marvelous Haiku! (Oh, I suppose that should have been a small "h", lol). Best wishes for the contest, my friend! I must visit more often ... I am so busy taking care of my folks and trying to record an album by next December, (and now the outdoor obligations and desires of summer), and I get VERY little time to read and comment, but it is one of my favorite things. I must manage time better. Blessings! :-) <3
Login to Reply
Talbot Avatar
Mick Talbot
Date: 5/11/2018 10:18:00 PM
With respect Gregory, it is out of respect to the Japanese they don't use capitals, plus if I am flicking through other poets poetry and I see haiku as the title I quickly move one. Offended but I'll get over it, take care of your loved ones! Mick
Date: 5/6/2018 11:47:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Laura. Lovely.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad