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crows gather on sycamore bones - bleak winter 4/29/2018

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Fj Thomas

Date: 1/22/2021 2:55:00 PM

In a haiku kind of mood. Enjoyed yours Agnes :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/17/2018 2:06:00 PM

Good one, Agnes.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/22/2018 1:24:00 AM

Really awesome and mysterious poem!

Honestly J.T.

Date: 5/28/2018 5:46:00 AM

Cool -JT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2018 2:39:00 AM

Waiting for more good stuff!!!

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/16/2018 8:13:00 PM

What do you know, a haiku I can understand. makes perfect sense. I see congratulations are in order. Wonderful haiku, Agnes.

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/8/2018 9:21:00 AM

Back to congrats! my friend...^WW^

Viv Wigley

Date: 5/2/2018 8:39:00 PM

Great imagery indeed, Agnes- congrats! Viv x

Eve Roper

Date: 5/2/2018 7:48:00 PM

great imagery , Agnes,... congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve

Md Johnson

Date: 5/2/2018 7:35:00 PM

So well done. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2018 5:41:00 PM

Truly one of the best I have read here. Congrats for your win, Agnes

Jan Allison

Date: 5/2/2018 5:09:00 PM

Dropping back to say many congratulations on your win Agnes :-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/2/2018 4:48:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Agnes. A beauty.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/2/2018 4:23:00 PM

Congratulations on attaining a podium finish, Agnes. I'd have expected this one to place higher. Regards // paul

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/2/2018 3:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your 3rd place win. Great haiku.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/2/2018 1:44:00 PM

- Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/30/2018 6:50:00 AM

Well crafted my friend...stay in the light...^WW^

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/30/2018 6:20:00 AM

Roll on summer. love the imagery, and the juxtapose

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/30/2018 5:51:00 AM

Poor crows...sycamore bones, bleak winter, all the supermarkets closed... The imagery of cold sadness...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/30/2018 12:32:00 AM

Vivid imagery, Agnes. You captured it well with these few lines. Haiku is always a challenge for me, but you have written one with finesse.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2018 8:07:00 PM

That is a great image for what you want to convey, Agnes. About the challenges with lines given, I kind of like them because I write more for the challenge of it than for emotive poetry. I think you are maybe someone who has to be writing something that is important to them. I try to do that too but a few of these contests, they are things I don't really care to be writing about!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/29/2018 4:22:00 PM

very descriptive Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx

Kevin Shaw

Date: 4/29/2018 1:41:00 PM

That's a good one Agnes, If its a contest entry, I think you have a winner, regards, Kevin x

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/29/2018 1:16:00 PM

- Excellent written, Agnes - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/29/2018 1:12:00 PM

A breathtaking Haiku, Agnes.. stunning imagery!