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Haiku

like my heart weeping willow hangs – without fruit *April 28, 2018

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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 8/5/2021 7:08:00 AM
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like your heart a fruitful tree too humankind
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 8/5/2021 3:52:00 AM
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This is a lovely haiku, can't believe you are gone, Carolyn:(
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/1/2018 5:51:00 PM
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hello Carolyn, this is a cute haiku. have a nice evening my friend.
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 5/21/2018 5:57:00 PM
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So much said in few words. Love this. Thanks.
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 5/9/2018 9:47:00 PM
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What a great beauty you have weaved in these heart touching lines my most valuable dear friend Carolyn. I often try to think about why I missed many of my wonderful friends of poetry soup with the passing of time but have failed to conclude any result. I would continue to have same adoration and love for you and your poems dear friend Carolyn even when I am not much active on ps. love and best wishes always...Ravindra
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 5/5/2018 11:59:00 AM
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Enjoyed...Congrats on your win Carolyn. Love and Regards.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/4/2018 11:09:00 AM
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Beautiful poem and congrats on your win. Hope all is well with you and that you are doing fine. love phyl
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/2/2018 8:03:00 PM
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Carolyn, this is such a beautiful poem ... back with congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve
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Md Johnson
Date: 5/2/2018 7:20:00 PM
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Poignant sentiment expressed so nicely in your ku. Well done!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/2/2018 5:36:00 PM
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Yours was one of my very favorites, Carolyn. Congrats for your win.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/2/2018 5:32:00 PM
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Thanks for participating Carolyn, congratulations on your 2nd place, Mick
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/2/2018 5:03:00 PM
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Many congratulations on your win Carolyn:-) hugs jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/2/2018 4:41:00 PM
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Wow, Lovely, Carolyn. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2018 3:52:00 PM
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Back with merited congratulations, Carolyn! Well done! Hugs // paul
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/2/2018 3:48:00 PM
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Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Excellent haiku.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/2/2018 2:03:00 PM
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Back with Congratulations Carolyn. Tom.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/2/2018 1:39:00 PM
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- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/30/2018 5:30:00 PM
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Beautiful hakiu Carolyn. I've seen some gems for the contest and this is one of them. Good luck. Tom.
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Harry Horsman
Date: 4/30/2018 4:06:00 PM
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Head up, Carolyn, this is shear poetry at it's best..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/29/2018 6:10:00 PM
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wow, this is just stunning, Carolyn!!! I too had fruit in mine, but in the opposite way. FAVE
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/28/2018 4:34:00 PM
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I feel the longing for things that are out of one's reach, Carolyn. Sadness can only be relieved by tears. Hugs // paul
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/28/2018 4:18:00 PM
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So, so sad, Carolyn, but beautiful verse.. luck in the contest... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/28/2018 3:11:00 PM
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.... oh .... weeping too - Well done - Luck in the contest, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/28/2018 12:42:00 PM
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aww so sad Carolyn:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/28/2018 2:05:00 PM
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Thanks, Jan.

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