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like my heart

weeping willow hangs –

     without fruit






*April 28, 2018

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Date: 6/1/2018 5:51:00 PM
hello Carolyn, this is a cute haiku. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 5/21/2018 5:57:00 PM
So much said in few words. Love this. Thanks.
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Date: 5/9/2018 9:47:00 PM
What a great beauty you have weaved in these heart touching lines my most valuable dear friend Carolyn. I often try to think about why I missed many of my wonderful friends of poetry soup with the passing of time but have failed to conclude any result. I would continue to have same adoration and love for you and your poems dear friend Carolyn even when I am not much active on ps. love and best wishes always...Ravindra
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Date: 5/5/2018 11:59:00 AM
Enjoyed...Congrats on your win Carolyn. Love and Regards.
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Date: 5/4/2018 11:09:00 AM
Beautiful poem and congrats on your win. Hope all is well with you and that you are doing fine. love phyl
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Date: 5/2/2018 8:03:00 PM
Carolyn, this is such a beautiful poem ... back with congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/2/2018 7:20:00 PM
Poignant sentiment expressed so nicely in your ku. Well done!
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Date: 5/2/2018 5:36:00 PM
Yours was one of my very favorites, Carolyn. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 5/2/2018 5:32:00 PM
Thanks for participating Carolyn, congratulations on your 2nd place, Mick
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Date: 5/2/2018 5:03:00 PM
Many congratulations on your win Carolyn:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2018 4:41:00 PM
Wow, Lovely, Carolyn. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:52:00 PM
Back with merited congratulations, Carolyn! Well done! Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Excellent haiku.
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Date: 5/2/2018 2:03:00 PM
Back with Congratulations Carolyn. Tom.
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Date: 5/2/2018 1:39:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/30/2018 5:30:00 PM
Beautiful hakiu Carolyn. I've seen some gems for the contest and this is one of them. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 4/30/2018 4:06:00 PM
Head up, Carolyn, this is shear poetry at it's best..
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Date: 4/29/2018 6:10:00 PM
wow, this is just stunning, Carolyn!!! I too had fruit in mine, but in the opposite way. FAVE
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Date: 4/28/2018 4:34:00 PM
I feel the longing for things that are out of one's reach, Carolyn. Sadness can only be relieved by tears. Hugs // paul
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Date: 4/28/2018 4:18:00 PM
So, so sad, Carolyn, but beautiful verse.. luck in the contest... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/28/2018 3:11:00 PM
.... oh .... weeping too - Well done - Luck in the contest, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/28/2018 12:42:00 PM
aww so sad Carolyn:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/28/2018 2:05:00 PM
Thanks, Jan.
Date: 4/28/2018 12:40:00 PM
Oh dear! What a lovely image but how sad. Well done for saying a lot in your 11 syllables Carolyn :-)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/28/2018 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, Nina.